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You Don't Know Me (poem)
by pretty89 at 4/26/2009 7:22:32 PM


(In a way, it's part 3 to my blogs about an ex.)

You walk all over me and play me like a game
A broken heart and lack of trust can hurt the same
Because for all you say about me that is or isn't true
You don't know me as well as you think you do

You can’t tell me what is right or what is wrong
Why can’t we put our differences aside and get along?
Everyone fights and disagrees in one way or another
But that doesn’t mean we can’t be there for each other

So do not criticize me for what I did or didn’t do
I may not understand our problems, but neither do you
Because for all you say about me that is or isn't true
You don't know me as well as you think you do

You say you are helping me, not making fun of me
But I can only laugh every time you run from me
I am the way I am because of things about you I despise
And those things are the many times you told me lies

If you come running back and want me to realize
The truth of what you say when looking in my eyes
Go ahead and say what you think is or isn't true
But you don't know me as well as you think you do


Comments

pankywitz
4/27/2009 8:46:34 AM

This is good. The rhyme isn't getting in the way like it has in the past. Your making it work for you. I still think you should write one or 2 free verse though. It will make you a much better poet. You are still tying yourself to structure. Let yourself be free. You have great ideas and are great and communicating with alot of emotion. Lose the rhyme for one poem and let yourself be free.