jmoon11
Apex, NC
26, joined Aug. 2012
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constructive criticism
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jodwop
Round Rock, TX
38, joined May. 2013
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Picture is alright. Forget to use the keyboard part of the computer to write a profile? There is nothing to critique.
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
51, joined Aug. 2010
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A few thoughts...
Bump your lower age range to bar legal.
You have 14 women already attached to you. Collector? Or is there something wrong with you that they won't date you?? You have the option to select "Don't Feature" under them in your Friends/Edit tab. You will still be able to see them, but a viewer won't get the sense you are working through a lineup.
You seem to spend an unnatural amount of time in the Sex & Dating forum. This would imply you are looking more for a f**kbuddy/NSA than anything else. If that's the case, don't change anything. If you were looking for something with more depth, consider that a smart woman will read your posts as they are permanently attached to your profile.
You may want to be really clear in your profile about what you're really looking for.
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badchevy4x4babe
Fort Worth, TX
25, joined May. 2011
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fill out your interests.
balance the age range (would you seriously date a high school senior at 18?) if so, go up the same number of years you go down.
profile pic is ok, but you look stoned/drunk/exhausted and the lighting isn't great.
i don't usually encourage pics with hats, but i would probably use the one with the white hat backwards as a profile pic until you get something with a big doofy grin and no hat to use instead.
bio is pretty generic, not much there to attract someone/interest them in you. lemme break it down.
Hi everyone, I am an intelligent, yet impulsive guy looking for a good partner to share my feelings and thoughts.
CORRECT ME IF I'M WRONG - BUT WHO ARE YOU COMPARING YOURSELF TO WHEN YOU SAY INTELIGENT? EINSTEIN WOULD THINK YOU'RE A DOOFUS. GARFIELD MAY THINK YOU'RE INTELIGENT. WHY DON'T YOU TELL US WHERE YOUR INTELIGENCE LIES. ARE YOU A GOOD PROBLEM SOLVER? GREAT AT MATH? DO YOU HAVE 12 COLLEGE DEGREES? AGAIN, YOUR VERSION OF IMPULSIVE - COMPARED TO WHOM? LOOKING FOR A PIC TO SHARE THOUGHTS AND FEELINGS - AREN'T WE ALL? ISN'T THAT PART OF A RELATIONSHIP? FYI, THIS LINE WAS YOUR "ATTENTION GETTING INTRODUCTION" NOTHING REAL SPECTACULAR, WAS IT.
I am educated, patient, confident about myself, trustworthy and handsome (at least I think so!).
AGAIN, ALL GENERICS. EDUCATED - HOW? PATIENT - IN WHAT WAYS? CONFIDENT ABOUT MYSELF - THAT'S COOL, BUT CAN ALSO MEAN COCKY. EXPLAIN YOUR CONFIDENCE. TRUSTWORTH - BLECH. YOU KNOW HOW MANY GUYS SAY THIS WHO AREN'T? LOTS. WHAT GUY IS GONNA TELL YOU HE'S NOT TRUSTWORTHY ANYWAYS. HANDSOME - LET US BE THE JUDGE. GET RID OF THAT. THAT JUST PROVES THE COCKY NOT CONFIDENT POINT I MADE.
I can be very naughty and unpredictable at times, yet I am quite a lovable guy.
THIS READS SEXUALLY. SO YOU'RE GONNA DO NAUGHTY AND UNPREDICTABLE THINGS TO A GIRL, THEN SPOON HER ALL NIGHT? MIGHT WANNA FIX THIS SO IT MEANS WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO SAY.
I have the capacity to make people laugh and also surprise them.
I DON'T LAUGH MUCH. CAN YOU REALLY?
I love sports and my pets.
I LOVE FISHING AND RUGBY. DO YOU? WHAT SPORTS? I LIKE CATS AND IGUANAS. DO YOU?
Looking for funny, responsible and kind women.
I DON'T THINK I'M FUNNY. I MAY BE RESPONSIBLE - I'M BAD WITH MONEY, I SPEND IT. AND I'M A SELF PROCLAIMED B*TCH. YOU MIGHT SEE ME AS FUNNY, RESPONSIBLE AND KIND. GET RID OF THIS. USE YOUR LIFE SKILLS TO FIGURE OUT IF SOMEONE IS THESE THINGS OR NOT. INSTEAD, DO YOU SEEK A LONG TERM RELATIONSIHP? F**K BUDDIES? NSA?
I love to watch/play sports and eating is great!
AGAIN, WHAT SPORTS? FAVORITE FOOD? DO YOU COOK? EAT OUT? WHAT.
I install fire sprinklers for a living and am a big believer in staying close with your family!!
TWO DIFFERENT TOPICS IN ONE SENTENCE. BREAK THIS UP. WHAT DO YOU LIKE ABOUT YOUR JOB? PLANS TO DO IT FOREVER? PLANS TO DO SOMETHING ELSE? WHAT'S YOUR DEFINITION OF CLOSE? MY DEFINITION IS 1300 MILES AWAY AND SEEING THEM ONLY AT FUNERALS.
Huge fan of the Florida gators and Atlanta braves
I DON'T KNOW SPORTS TEAMS IN THAT REGION. SO I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT GATORS AND BRAVES PLAY.
GOOO GATORS!!!!
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