bmills667
Granite City, IL
28, joined Dec. 2012
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bmills667
Granite City, IL
28, joined Dec. 2012
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
51, joined Aug. 2010
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Your photos make it appear you never get out of your vehicle. Delete half and replace them with pictures of you outdoors in daylight. Why no smile??
Punctuation, please.
The idea of writing enough clues for your viewer is to help her find things in common with you and feel a connection. If that's all you want to offer, fine, just don't use the lame line about having nothing else to talk about. That just means you're a boring date with nothing to say.
You'd date a high school senior???? icky...
You have over a dozen women already attached to you. Collecting trophies?? Or none of them has agreed to date you yet?? Either way, it makes you look weird with all those women attached. You have the option in your Friends tab to edit that by selecting the "Don't feature" tab. You will still be able to see your little friends, but a viewer won't get the impression you're already juggling a dozen girls.
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vida60
Norman, OK
53, joined Jul. 2012
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Hate to burst your bubble, but, personally I think your profile needs a lot of suggestions,
Remember, you ask for a review, (rating includes reviewing) I'd have to rate it a big fat O
for these reasons:
"I'm one of a kind." <----no shit? really? aren't we all one of a kind? the last time I checked, there's only 'one' of me also.
"am very intelligent and love to talk." <----- you're very intelligent? well, you may want to show it in your bio, it doesn't show, why do you think you're intelligent? schooling? street smart? book smart? a hands on type of guy?
"I am a father of a 3 year old."<----keep this, does he live with you? I didn't even notice your stats, if not, how often do you see him?
" drinking playing darts pool watching movies taking walks or drives spending time with my daughter " <------ you could list these also in your interests, it would make your profile more searchable, such as: Casual drinking, Darts, Pool, Movies, long walks, traveling, family time, and so on....
"I work lots commuting is half the battle lol." <-----you may want to leave this out and just tell the viewer about your job, whatever it is, whats your goals?
"I'm easy to get along with I'm only hot tempered or jealous if it calls for it but seriously i dont get mad or worry either its me or all of them simple as that." <---this doesn't make sense, you're either jealous or not, everyone has jealousy in them, that's how we're created, but it's how you let it or not let it control your attitude that counts, being overly jealous is not good for anyone, it leads to stalking, or it could lead to it. This might scare potential viewers off.
"Prioritizing is the key." <-----wouldn't this be a given? the key is what is priority in your life, you may want to either leave this out or explain it.
"I would like to talk to nice sweet confident pretty and talkative ladies to get to know each ohter and see where it goes." <----- I assume that ohter is 'other'? right? you're looking for a "pretty" lady? what if she's beautiful, but she don't know it, cause she's modest and not shallow? you'd be missing out, beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, you're limiting your viewers by saying anything about a physical feature such as being 'pretty', if one that isn't your cup of tea, nothing says you have to take them up on the offer, right?
"feel Free to ask me anything I'm an open book and if i told you all about me what would be the point." <------you're an open book? you are entitled to 5000 characters for your bio, even a 10 year old couldn't even tell his entire life in just 5000 characters.
Tell the viewer about your job, what you do in your spare time, what type of relationship are you seeking? give your bio some character, your character.
good luck.
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