angeldelite
Crestview, FL
age: 58
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Guys and Dolls what do you think about my profile?
[Edited 10/31/2007 1:17:37 AM]
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lqqkatme
Kansas City, MO
age: 59
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I think you sound a little desperate. And I like your anologoy of food and how you would taste! Great mix of fact and humor. I would lose the letter to your love who ever he is. And the Pic if your feet
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texastermite
Milton, FL
age: 56
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I like it personally. The Letter is a nice touch. You sound like you know what you want and are looking for it. And your feet are just fine. Nice pics by the way.
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lawvixen
Oldsmar, FL
age: 54
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Welcome..........
I enjoyed the comparison of food tastes, flavors, and samplings. Finally something different than the same old bland profile. The poetry is fine, as it shows your artistic side. Also, your profile is direct and to the point, stating exactly what you want.
Personally, I would change the main photo to the one of you dressed up or the one at the beach. The present main photo is too suggestive.
Break the first paragraph up into sentences with periods and spaces...it seems to just ramble on with no sentence structure. Check your typos too.
Good luck and happy hunting.......
[Edited 11/9/2007 9:08:20 PM]
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potentloveslave
Dade City, FL
age: 40
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I think its a shame that you are 300 miles away.
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