5/15/2009 11:49:51 AM |
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brockr23
Chandler, AZ
age: 33
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Untitled
You rape me
And wear on my dignity.
You hate me
Ans tear out my sanity.
You break me
And feed your own vanity.
So many years I spent alone
As you sat only inches away
Many miles were in between us
I still can't figure why I stayed.
Hindsight is truly 20/20
As i see the evil that is you
You have stolen so much lifeblood
I can barely see the things that are true.
You rape me
And wear on my dignity.
You hate me
Ans tear out my sanity.
You break me
And feed your own vanity.
I wonder, do you feel good
About the schemes you've put into play?
Do you even have a conscience?
Behind the malicious games of today.
I hope one day you feel the same things
And you lose yourself in all of your hate
Someday you will feel that Karma
Is a wicked revenge and it is just your fate.
You rape me
And you do it ever consciously
You hate me
And it's only vengeance that you see.
You break me
Now you've died inside your own vanity.
~Brett
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5/15/2009 12:11:53 PM |
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beannie51
Lockeford, CA
age: 26 online now!
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hey,
wow that one was very well written, and right on point. you have another a in my book.
keep going you will get far.
brandy
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5/15/2009 12:22:02 PM |
Untitled, but you can read it anyway. |
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miss37ram
Cincinnati, OH
age: 37
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Truly great!
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5/15/2009 1:02:04 PM |
Untitled, but you can read it anyway. |
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devilangel24
Stillwater, OK
age: 24
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Brett, this is truely amazing, Just like everything else you write. Your always so true and to the point, and I love it.
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5/19/2009 6:09:19 AM |
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brockr23
Chandler, AZ
age: 33
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Any title ideas from the readers here?
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5/19/2009 6:16:53 AM |
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andi954
Fort Lauderdale, FL
age: 39
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A title from a Queen song comes to mind....
Death on 2 legs
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5/19/2009 9:26:45 AM |
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chrissie_m
Salem, OR
age: 23
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Another amazing bunch of words by none other then the infamous Brett. D
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