| 12/18/2007 10:32:47 AM |
~~ Love Is Like A Poem: From The Heart Of A Lonely Soul |
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ragedachilles
Lancaster, OH
age: 22
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There is no such thing as a perfect person
But there is such thing as a person whose perfect for you
Your that person for me
You have no flaws
Everything about you from your hair to your feet and the sound of your voice I admire
You are a special an unique person
You are everything I care to ever want
You are the perfect person for me
I adore you
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| 12/18/2007 10:33:35 AM |
~~ Love Is Like A Poem: From The Heart Of A Lonely Soul |
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ragedachilles
Lancaster, OH
age: 22
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Are you to good for me
I want to be your protecter
I now understand we will never be together
I dont know why
I sit down and cry
I dont fear death
It hurts every time I take a breath
I am thankful to have a few caring friends
without them I would not care if my life ends
I wonder why you dont love me
I have no answer
I just want you to know that I love you
I will do anything for you
It hurts so bad to know you will never love me
someone that would give anything to be with you
I pray that you may love me
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| 12/18/2007 10:34:07 AM |
~~ Love Is Like A Poem: From The Heart Of A Lonely Soul |
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ragedachilles
Lancaster, OH
age: 22
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As I long to hold your hand
I want to tell you it is GODS plan for you to be with me
I get on my knees to thank GOD for you
There is nothing more Beautiful than you
I want to give you everything including the moon
I want to marry you so I can carry you forever
Just go go with your heart and dont let us drift apart
Fate brought us together
My destiny is with you and no other
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| 12/18/2007 10:34:29 AM |
~~ Love Is Like A Poem: From The Heart Of A Lonely Soul |
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ragedachilles
Lancaster, OH
age: 22
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I have alot more but thats enough
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| 12/18/2007 10:51:09 AM |
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musicman_zzz
Decatur, AL
age: 40
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It seems to me, that what we have here, is a "GUITAR MAN". Kudos to you !!! You sound like me; I've got over 1500 songs I've written in my lifetime, and got thousands more to go. No crap man, totally honest. I've got spiral notebooks slap full to the brim with songs of "mine", all "mine", straight from the soul. My talent comes from the greatest of all time poets------
~~~~~~~~G ~~ O ~~ D~~~~~~~~~~~~, my friends, for without my GOD,
" I " W O U L D B E , , , ,-------------------> N O T H I N G !!!!!!!
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| 12/18/2007 11:09:49 AM |
~~ Love Is Like A Poem: From The Heart Of A Lonely Soul |
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ragedachilles
Lancaster, OH
age: 22
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I agree. Without GOD we are nothing. All my stuff comes from moments in my life when I really feel with my heart. I have to feel it to write it
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| 12/18/2007 11:54:06 AM |
~~ Love Is Like A Poem: From The Heart Of A Lonely Soul |
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musicman_zzz
Decatur, AL
age: 40
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Oh yeah, Soultry,,,,,, that's b/s cuz you're lying
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| 12/18/2007 1:02:24 PM |
~~ Love Is Like A Poem: From The Heart Of A Lonely Soul |
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itsjustme67
Salem, MO
age: 41
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SO
this year without you
has been like the tree limbs
blowing to and fro
this year without you
has been like the wind
in the dessert blow and blow
this year without you
has been like the worst
thing to happen to me i know
this year without you
has been like the winters
in the artict cold from the snow
this year without you
has been the one to make
me wonder why you want to go
this year without you
as you and i both know
im asking you to look into my eyes
please dont go
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| 12/18/2007 1:25:29 PM |
~~ Love Is Like A Poem: From The Heart Of A Lonely Soul |
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musicman_zzz
Decatur, AL
age: 40
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Excellant Job 67, it reminds me of K C and the Sunshine Band Singing "Please, Don't Go".
An Oldie, but damn sure a good one.
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| 12/18/2007 2:35:38 PM |
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cats43injax
Jacksonville, FL
age: 44
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Cool one 67. I agree with Musicman, it has hints of lyrics past. The days of the oldies but goodies.
Come on folks, lets get some serious competition going here. I know I just did mine off the top of my head, but I know we have some people on here that really can write. Show your goods folks. Let's get this thing rolling.
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| 12/18/2007 11:10:47 PM |
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cooltammy45
Eugene, OR
age: 45 online now!
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I once was alone then in the road I met with another down this road together we traveled arm in arm. We laughed and played never once thinking it could all be gone in the blink that we call a wink. Life went on, life was good we had some kids and this was fun. Life took some strange turns but with love we all endured what it had to offer. All we could say is life goes on and this is just one of life little lessons we are here to learn. As time passed on we grew older and we all thought a little wiser. But life passes by in a blink that we call a wink then it's gone and no where to be found. Then life take on new turns ones you just think you can not handle. You go through this thinking what happen why is it taking this path. You travel down this forbidden path not knowing what will happen. You take this blind trust that all will be better and then you find that pain and misery have filled your lives. Through the pain we suffer not knowing it affected the kids we went on and one day feeling lost when the one you loves says he wants to die. He is gone, no where to be found, you franticly try to find him to no avail. When time passes in the blink we call a wink you see all there is to see. For life is all wrapped up in that little blink that we sometimes call a wink. We all got together to be thankful once again and move on and live as life intended. But once again this life takes a turn down an uncertain path one I did not know about. I felt so alone and lost yet understood the meaning it left. In that blink we call a wink life is gone. Behind it leave this path of destruction we feel we can not over come but yet somehow we manage to move forward. Never did I feel I would be alone again in life! I have a blink that is my wink in life I hope to find that someone to share my wink with.
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| 12/19/2007 5:34:21 AM |
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musicman_zzz
Decatur, AL
age: 40
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Very Good Job Everyone ... And A Very Good December Mornin To All. Here's One I Wrote About A Year Ago. I've Got It Posted On Another Site Of Mine, So I'm Just Going To Transfer It Here....Here It Goes...
I Can't Escape This Heartbreak
Lonely Nights
Staring Out My Window
It Don't Feel Right
So Why Did I Let You Go
I Didn't Think I Was Falling
I Never Thought You Could Make Me Feel This Way
Thought It Was Destiny Calling
I Knew That I Was Wrong
The Moment You Walked Away
( Chorus )
All Of My Life, As I Chased After You
I Was Falling In Love, But I Didn't Know What To Do
You Were My Best Friend, Every Breath I Would Take
But Now It Comes To The End, Because We Threw It Away
I Feel The Heartache
As Time Moves On
I Can't Escape This Heartbreak
I've Got To Be Strong
But It's So Hard For Me To Take
I Was So Wrong
For Pushing All Of Your Love Away
And Now It's Too Late
Written by- (ZIP)
Well, It Didn't Post The Style I Wrote It In. Since I'm Fairly New Here On DHU, I've Got To Learn All The Ins And Outs Of Everything. I Know There's Ways Of "Tweekin" The Format On Our Post, So Who Ever Can Give Me A Heads up On it, Before I figure it out on my own, feel free to " E-mail " me some HINTS, cool ?
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| 12/19/2007 6:25:39 AM |
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cats43injax
Jacksonville, FL
age: 44
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WOW! Now this one I really like Musicman! I can feel the pain in that one! I think all of us has made the mistake of letting the one go that we felt regret afterwards. Really great work there! Bravo!
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| 12/19/2007 9:49:46 AM |
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cooltammy45
Eugene, OR
age: 45 online now!
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You never seem to amaze me in what you have to write. You put up some awesome stuff Zip I mean that from the heart.
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| 12/19/2007 11:15:58 AM |
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musicman_zzz
Decatur, AL
age: 40
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Well thank you very much yall. Writting "IS" one of my loves in this life. I've just posted a little experiment on my regular blog yall should check out. I think you just might get a kick out of it. It's entitled- ~BRUNCH~ Z I P's C A F E~ So yall hit my profile page up and click on that, grab a chair, and chow down.
Thanks "EVERYONE" for all of your support, kindness, humor, and friendship. I mean that from all of my heart, I love you all, and keep stopping by for a good laugh.
This is the ZIPPER-ZEE, MUSICMAN_ZZZ, The Musical Chef sayin----"HEY YALL, THANKS FOR BEING FRIENDLY TO EVERYBODY, ESPECIALLY ME, MUSICMAN_ZZZ.
 
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