adb1976
Elkhart, IN
37, joined Aug. 2011
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Can anyone review my profile and be brutaly honest and let me know what is wrong qwith it and what i should change or edit?
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spanishleaves
Willingboro, NJ
23, joined Mar. 2013
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Any suggestions please?
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
51, joined Aug. 2010
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This is what's in your profile when I just looked:
Hi. I am new at this so if u wanna know something message me..,
OMG... if u wanna know something.. how about ANYTHING? There's nothing there yet for a woman to use to find things in common and feel any type of connection. There's no sense of your personality or humour.
We can't write your profile for you, but depending on what you're looking for, you will need some basics:
- clear photos that someone else has taken. Not in a car, bathroom mirror, webcam.
- WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING FOR HERE. Casual sex? casual dating? platonic friends only? ultimately one great lady? The more you want, the more details you need in your profile.
- If you want to attract someone for an actual relationship, you will need to add a line about your work/what you love about it (shows stability and reliability); you will need to talk about your best quality (what kind of sense of humour/how are you kind or honest or whatever?); what kinds of things you enjoy (music, weekend activities, sports, travel... be specific); for the kids, how many/how old/how often; what qualities you are looking for in a partner. USE POSITIVE LANGUAGE ONLY.
Fill in the Interests field with items or activities you enjoy. One or two-word items only.
If you'll date someone 10 years younger, why not 10 years older?
Once you've actually made an effort, post back to this same thread for more feedback. Keep in mind all your posts in all the forums are permanently attached to your profile.
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adb1976
Elkhart, IN
37, joined Aug. 2011
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Edited now can u look at it and give me any more suggestions
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