sirenjasmine
Columbia, SC
age: 25
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I would like to know what you all think of my profile. Anything I could do to improve it etc..no worries I take critic well
~Siren~
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octaveoctave
Annapolis, MD
age: 33 online now!
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Well I can't see it very well because of a very busy background; black type on a busy background is maybe not your best choice. But do you know if you want more kids or not? You might fill that in (almost no one fills in the income of course). Paragraphs would also be a good idea.
I will say that from what I can see you, you have a very pretty face.
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george1965
Bedford, VA
age: 45
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nice profile, really nice pis, wow might need to answer do you want kids, thats up to you. good luck.
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sk8sum
Austin, TX
age: 20
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Alright let me say this first since the first line may be all that people bother to read.
If you feel the need to butcher the English language when you message me...Don't bother. If you choose not to read the rest of my profile...Don't bother because you can't be that interested other than what I look like. And if you have a habit of those one liner messages such as "What's up?" 'How you doing?" and nothing else again ....Don't bother. These types of messages will be ignored on sight, sorry if that offends anyone but it is what it is.
^^^^^^ This isn't necessary, when someone does something like ... "how are you", you could respond in a sophisticated manner ... you're basically showing the other person the whole "how are you, what up" thing isn't cute ... you would rather have someone can type properly.
I am a very outgoing person.
I say what I think and make no excuses. Ask me no questions I tell you no lies. I love to have fun and will try just about anything once if it sounds like a good time. I enjoy reading, I write a lot. Horseback riding has been a favorite pass time of mine for a while now. I enjoy life no matter the circumstances. I feel I must say this though one would hope it was not needed but intelligence is of the utmost importance to me. To be able to actually hold a conversation is so refreshing. I have tried a few new ways of meeting people since I have been in the Columbia SC area. I will admit not all have been bad, though it seems sometimes men are a bit....intimidated when meeting a woman that is sure of herself. If that is the case here....tough. As you may be able to tell I pull no punches but I am a great friend to have.
No here I feel I must add my disclaimer, if you intend to send me a message with one line here is my advice...DON'T. It would be a waste of your time and mine.
^^^^^^ Repetitious, no need for this, it's making you look b*tchy IMO (in my opinion)
Again intellect it is not just a pretty word, and if you could not sum up enough time or effort to send more than a one liner, really were you that interested in the first place?
^^^^^^ this was mentioned as well >.>
Well I suppose I have prattled on enough, now if I have sent you screamed and running hell bent in the other direction...lol. I am really an open book if you want to get to know me..just ask.
^ And this is cute (no homo)
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great_hands
Hammond, IN
age: 33
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The letters are hard to read on that background. One of them must be changed. I get the impression you have what is known as a dominate personality. Rather then attacking all men who read the profile, try a more suttle approach. Example: I am a leader, who cares deeply about friends and family. Everyone knows I am the one who will get things done.
Change don't bother with one liners into: I want to be asked questions ( plural ). If you cannot say more than a few words in an email. I'll assume you won't say much in a conversation. Since this is one of my favorite things to do ( Talk ), for me that is a problem. In short your profile is brutal, harsh, hard to see, and emasculating. The only men I see responding to that are sex fiends crying out " Yes Mistress! " Good luck and happy hunting.
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