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hows my profile
Liz. OcircleO nailed it on the first thing I saw too. You need to say what you want in a man.
Weed out what you don't want. Your young, want marriage eventually and children? "I'd like to f... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 7:47:10 PM
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Finished my profile. Please critique it.
Sure, use all the lines you want. Your other ending about mudding was good, it was an open invite so to say. I'd use it.
Check my last line, it was a recommendation too and more of a toss out the... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 7:25:46 PM
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Finished my profile. Please critique it.
| OcircleO, I checked before and you have done much work and change. It's looking good, you have really made an effort and applied what Terbear said and I think some of what you are seeing visiting othe... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 6:43:40 PM
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Just a comment for those who have had or wish profiles reviewed
| Thank you OcircleO. I am also happy you changed to the closeup smile pic. Very good pic. Women will like it and they will look at the others too. Wish I could smile like that, or like Ron White the co... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 5:52:30 PM
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Profile Review
Makisha. Pretty name. Ok, a mans perspective on what he wants to see and needs to see.
Your doing well for a start, you can add and improve it and find what you want. You're an educated perso... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 3:37:03 PM
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Looking for suggestions
Dream. Much better! Good work. Contiguous US or even the acronym; CONUS "continental united states" which most understand simply from online auctions and "shipping CONUS"
"I like watching spo... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 1:38:27 PM
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Quick Review?
| Kristen. Kiwi_girl is one of the best on the site. Glad you are reading and responding but you did ask for help, no need to explain yourself. Take the free help from the people who care enough about a... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 1:20:32 PM
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what am I doing wrong or not saying? H E L P!
| Christie, Ok, now I have custom colors turned off so I can read your profile. I still suggest a lighter background and contrast the text font to background so others can read it. If I can't read it s... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 10:25:07 AM
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in need of a profie review
Sheshe. You have some good input from a couple of the best reviewers on the site, take it.
Split your thoughts in spaced sentences to place more emphasis them.
Read some of the pro r... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 7:58:37 AM
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what am I doing wrong or not saying? H E L P!
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 7:49:59 AM
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How's my profile lookin??
| You're welcome. Work on it, the good people here will help. I mean REALLY help. Shawn |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 7:26:03 AM
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Just a comment for those who have had or wish profiles reviewed
If you ask for a review there are good people here that do a professional review and give freely of themselves, To HELP you.
The majority never thanks them. Some do and it's common courtesy, ... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 7:12:21 AM
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what am I doing wrong or not saying? H E L P!
Ron. Your right about being able to read them or they won't be read, good example right here. I can't read it to help.
Turning off the option on the site may help many who have unreadable pro... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 6:54:44 AM
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what am I doing wrong or not saying? H E L P!
| Christie. Start with the color scheme. I can't read your profile to comment. Lighter background, darker text. If you like the text at least try a different background but be sure to have enough contra... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 5:16:58 AM
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Hows it looking
| Dan. You're trying. You have great advice above and unlike so many you have thanked people, reposted and are trying. You don't have to apologize, should have seen my mess before I got some good input!... |
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shawnee_b |
5/24/2010 5:01:31 AM
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