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9/8/2008 1:14:05 AM	Write something right now!
someazguy Chandler, AZ age: 45	Time to exercise your creativity... write something original on this forum right now. Using the 'honor system' to trust that what we read was really written at the spur of the moment. Take all the time you want and use any format or subject you chose. BUT once you start you cannot stop until its complete. My insta-poem: started 12:50am finished 1:17am HOW CAN THAT BE by someazguy Who is this person in my life. I have only known her for a few months. But it seems like forever. How can that be. Who am I to question what I feel. I have no control over destiny. But it feels like time is moving so fast. How can that be. Who could have guessed this would happen. I feel like it's a dream. But I am awake. How can that be. Who else would know about these feelings. I feel wonderful. But I'm in pain at the same time. How can that be. Who is to say it will last forever. I just know, that is what I want. But it feels like it already has. How can that be. [Edited 9/8/2008 1:15:02 AM]
9/8/2008 12:44:23 PM	Write something right now!
jxl New York, NY age: 34	My mind’s eye tells me she’s criminal, Subliminally submerged in my thoughts Though I’ve fought and still fight, She’s kryptonite, her crippling might; blinding, numbing my senses. Cruel and unusual punishment, capital in offense. Premeditated murder she writes a four page letter Attacking my character, dissecting my faults, insulting my intellect. Aiming missiles of mass destruction at my heart in attempt to further her ruse Choose! She orders. Ultimatums injected intravenously, simultaneously. Nonstop, she bombards my instincts with nuclear force, Tossing aside all common sensibilities, Sensibly she senses my weakening abilities, Making or rather manipulating or, insinuating, Assuming my choosing between her and happiness or rather, her emulating my happiness Or, lack of, in her absence. With all determination she fights my termination of this suppose-ed relationship Relations cemented in between her hips, sealed with soft lips We'll call it -- A Price for Freedom Softly killing me with, whispered alterations of truth Obliterated youth, my visions of love all a spoof 151 proof unable to mask the hurt Drunkenly unstable, unstably blurting hurtful meaningful Words – phrases – consonants and vowels, grazing her heart Deadlier than hollow points, my sorrow points out like porcupines or Cuban missiles in Guantanamo. Geronimo fought for freedom and so I tap into his spirit for strength and angst Against a devil’s soldier masquerading in red thongs, Singing songs of desperation, lolling tattooed breasts. Promises of mental unrest set like a picture perfect dusk --- seen at dawn. Sworn to love yet torn, inexplicably like a Muslim praising Jesus Heart colder than an aborted fetus Murderous inventions looming like cancerous cells invading Intentions paving my way to hell. A yell is released causing mental twisters, tornadoes, vertigo I’M FREE – she’s dead. LIMP! I’M FREE!! Not guilty your honor! My defense – temporary insanity – HERS! I’ve cured her permanently – forever. I’M FREE! And yes still free as I sit facing the death penalty,ironically – I AM FREE!
9/8/2008 2:10:06 PM	Write something right now!
jesi1989 Walland, TN age: 19	Some days I want to fly away to just go back to another day back to when I had you here back to when my skies were clear before you knocked on heaven's door back before my heart was sore now I sit and wonder why I couldn't be there when you had to die I sit and wonder how you are I will never forget you my shining star To Dustin Seaton I miss you soooo much... But you will still be my "biggest fan" and "shining star", even in heaven...
9/8/2008 7:08:20 PM	Write something right now!
grasshopper74 Churubusco, IN age: 34	To look inside my mind unclear to look outside I cannot hear why do I want what I cannot have why do I sometimes feel so sad I do not mean to do you wrong I wish I could sing you a song although my heart is dark and gray although my life is a mess today tommorow is soon to come tommorow I choose not to be numb
9/8/2008 9:47:44 PM	Write something right now!
swwray Abingdon, VA age: 36	Breathe`~
9/13/2008 3:45:25 PM	Write something right now!
alicekathleen Sacramento, CA age: 63	You think I am in church just To meditate, well, yes, but... Oh you, you in the choir With the pouty mouth, I would like to make you sing! Sing just for me, sing of Love, sing of times long gone, of Faraway places with the strange sounding names, And, if you want, take off that hot robe, Stay a while, but whatever you do, Keep that mouth close to mine!
9/15/2008 9:45:44 PM	Write something right now!
olehickory Janesville, WI age: 69	Sweet Sue Last night I held you in my arms What a joy was within my heart. I could feel the warmth and tenderness, And it was so hard for us to part. You put your arms around me, As I put my head upon your chest, I felt your love, and heard your heart, Beat gently within your breast. A gentle kiss, a warm embrace, A promise of things to be, Our hearts are becoming slowly entwined For all eternity. I think of you throughout the day, You are a gift from up above, So today I give to you my heart, And send you all my love. A true experience last night. Danny
9/17/2008 12:27:00 PM	Write something right now!
alicekathleen Sacramento, CA age: 63	Hey wait up, Youth! I wasn't done yet! Dontcha know there is more, more, more Of just about everything? Hey Youth, you left Me behind reading McCalls Magazine while You tiptoed out the back door without Even a fare-thee-well, so what's with that? DId you have to take my rock and roll records And my real mink poddle pin? You even Took Momma's photo, and I'm gonna get You for that! If I ever catch you, Youth, I'm Goin' to pull out your hair, knock your teeth out Just like you did to me! Leave you flat in the Dust on some road stuck in the 1950's Go see how YOU like it, all by yourself Go sing "Like a Rollin' Stone", 'cause You don't get sympathy from me! Get yourself on that Greyhound And get back here, you hear me?
9/17/2008 1:18:44 PM	Write something right now!
ladyenchanted Cantonment, FL age: 38	The light at the end.. 3:15 Sept 17th ending 3:20 same date... Sadness fell today with in my heart, Broken dreams all torn apart. The path of promise that I once followed Are dreams of mine drowning in sorrow. I have seen the future threw your eyes now mine are open I can see all the lies I meant no harm with the love I have gave You captured my heart my soul you have saved My services are rendered now I am dismissed From your web of lies your love of twist. Darkness fell within my heart Now I see the light since we are apart....
9/18/2008 4:52:58 PM	Write something right now!
mystical1939 Sun Prairie, WI age: 69	Life’s Ambiguous Journey… Birth, polluted air fills new lungs; vision is blurred, reality is presented in a psychedelic arena call life; panic, crying, and then a false sense of peace. Breathing, suckling, crawling, walking; the very essence of existence creates fragile times; fused in a harsh world of both happiness and discontent. These certainties, these realities has ended life before it is deem by the law of nature; too fearful to fight for happiness and conquer discontent. Yet, one can walk out of the void of unhappiness; survive the journey through mist of doubts and move forward toward the next juncture of existence for the duration of life’s ambiguous journey.
9/20/2008 12:17:51 AM	Write something right now!
1funocgal Laguna Niguel, CA age: 50	Frustration's Maze Again, caught in a maze, A network of craziness On my way to magnificence. Mere time fails to unbind Insanity's weave. I flee Through an arch in sound mind, To be gripped by saboteur's hands, Contemptuous fate Latches the gate At the threshold of dreams. In my darkness, A light shines within, It is my faith, my key to bliss. I release my spirit, And travel the path of God's radiance. with belief, I am master.
9/20/2008 2:53:07 PM	Write something right now!
itztee Richmond, VA age: 40	Nice work everybody. I was going to post some of my stuff but y'all are intimidating me. Jxl--you are on a whole nother level with yours.
9/20/2008 10:07:01 PM	Write something right now!
munchkin57 Medicine Hat, AB age: 58	The world seems crazy lights flashing, screams rendering the cold night air just moments ago, on our way to the fair life had no inkling of what was to come I do not remember the pain. The first thing I see eyes of concern looking at me where am I, I whisper so loud, waking from a long unconsious sleep I do not remember the pain. Thoughts crowd my mind circling, blending, torn apart, muscles clenching my world changed in an instant I close my eyes to feel God mending I do not remember the pain. Times passes slowly My loved one is gone, freinds and family gather around me to share helping hands to guide me while I do remember the pain. Dedicated to my sister who was involved in a head on collision with a drunk driver, July 12, 1982. Three people died as a result, my brother in law being one of them.
9/21/2008 3:33:50 PM	Write something right now!
zoidmagnite Niles, MI age: 39	Okay here it goes: There is a light out there. Far, far away. And it blinks at me nearly every day. Catching my gaze, my mind's little maze, I feel myself reaching. It just blinks at me; no emotion at all so I find that CD to drown out the call. And just when I think I've shaken it off there it is yet again. No it's not a friend. It just sits there blinking every day. My mind's little maze drifts into my gaze. It haunts me, it taunts me, I can't look away. It drives me, it drives me into a craze. Blinking and blinking, it changes my tone. There! Out there! Make it leave me alone! Stop it! Stop it! Just leave me alone! I know. I know! I long for a home. //END No worries! It's not emo. It's just a writing. Zoidmagnite [Edited 9/21/2008 3:42:02 PM]
9/24/2008 12:27:36 PM	Write something right now!
someazguy Chandler, AZ age: 45	IF If everything was as it should be You'd be here with me right now. If all was right with the world I'd never have to wonder why I am alone. If life was fair and love was kind No one would be looking for something different. If I go to sleep tonight with you in my arms My dreams will be empty for being fulfilled. If I wake tomorrow and I am happy forever Is something wrong?

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