| 9/11/2008 7:55:05 AM |
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tvm2082
Birmingham, AL
age: 28
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I have only had it up for a couple of days , is it too long or is that even possible. I've had no good hits on it yet. Just woundering about some improvments
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| 9/11/2008 8:03:52 AM |
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italianlady05
Omaha, NE
age: 53
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you want honesty? Yes, i think it's way too long..i couldn't read it all, there were no breaks in paragraphs so it made it hard to follow what you were saying. The parts i did read made me think..wow, don't go on and on about past "girlfriends"....
and the pics? honey you went from some tiny far away one for your profile main pic to highschol prom (aren't you well into your 20's? ), to apparently serving in the military (couldn't quite be sure of that one), to posting one that says this is the most recent and you've gained weight (which doesn't really look like any of the other pics)..
I'd suggest putting up RECENT pics and living in the present...now don't be mad, you asked and that's JMO...
good luck..
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| 9/11/2008 9:16:41 AM |
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tvm2082
Birmingham, AL
age: 28
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OK I did some work on it , um but most of those pics are within 2yo I just havent goten a haircut in a while , thought I would see how some longer hair worked out , and if someone knows how to get the paragraphs to space out right let me know , I know a little about grammer and had tried proper paragraph spacing but when saving it, it just compressed back together and thats kinda agravating
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| 9/11/2008 1:56:55 PM |
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tvm2082
Birmingham, AL
age: 28
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darn so bad nobody even wants to reveiw it ??? 
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| 9/12/2008 6:13:44 PM |
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yeahthisisme
Clearfield, UT
age: 55
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It is a little long. The pic is a bit distant but overall things are ok as long as you like it.
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| 9/12/2008 6:21:18 PM |
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carlisle_girl
Carlisle, AR
age: 18
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change the background pic. cant see very much. u look very cute i would cut the long hair but hey thats just my opinion...
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| 9/21/2008 11:50:19 AM |
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tvm2082
Birmingham, AL
age: 28
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How about A rereveiw I have updated and changed alot , I bit shorter now ,, any input would be appreciated 
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| 9/21/2008 7:39:55 PM |
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corallady
Cape Coral, FL
age: 65
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Well, I think it's still too long, cut some of the stuff, leave something to talk about when you first start chatting, I specially didn't care about the last paragraph. Also, I suggest you do a spell check on it. Plenty of typos. Didn't look at the pics, but the main one looks okay.
Good luck!
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| 9/21/2008 8:15:34 PM |
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angeleyese005
Jacksonville, FL
age: 58
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Everything looks okay to me except you may want to put up a different picture as the main one. You are very handsome, but that picture is not a good one.
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