| 11/24/2009 11:05:45 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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thingy_me_bob
Lawrence, KS
age: 40
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The tension’s getting hotter
I’d like to hold her head underwater
Sublime
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| 11/24/2009 12:54:55 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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The tension’s getting hotter
I’d like to hold her head underwater
Sublime
OK- Some of you THINK you can write, but I really dont give a shit- Especially those that CANT READ. This thread isnt plagarize random song lyrics and post here.
IF YOU CANT WRITE ORIGINAL MATERIAL, then please dont commit your plagaristic crimes in my threads.
13 is the Number between 12 and 14. If you have trouble counting to thirteen, then take off your shoes. If you are still confused at this point - THEN DONT POST ON MY THREADS!
It isnt that hard peeps, OR IS IT?????
And if you still cant help yourself, and you must disregard the instructions for this thread, Intellectual property rights, and just plain common sense, THEN AT LEAST ATTRIBUTE THE QUOTE CORRECTLY.
Bradly Nowell Wrote ALL of Sublime's Lyrics. The other two bums are simply using the Sublime Name so they could participate in Cypress Hills smokout this past August.
Bradley Nowell's Overdose left a son and a wife that you are now taking liberties with the main source of income he left them. To Simply spout a couple of lines from a band and attribute the band with the quote is just ignorant, but hell, you cant count either- what did I expect???
R.I.P Brad
R.I.P. Loudog
Dont F**k with my Band!!!
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| 11/24/2009 2:42:04 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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You'll find
that by writing like an ass
you appear to be one.
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| 11/26/2009 9:00:37 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Better to appear like an Ass
Than to be treated like a Mule
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| 11/26/2009 10:19:49 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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fyathyrio
Savannah, GA
age: 41
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redneck boss
no brains at work
gonna stab him with a fork
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| 11/27/2009 7:56:02 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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redneck boss
no brains at work
gonna stab him with a fork
So close yet so far.................... Just need an adjective to make it 13
How about a DULL Fork LOL???
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| 11/28/2009 9:01:37 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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elfqueen
Roff, OK
age: 56
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people who dont return
are going to earn
nothin in they yearn
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| 11/28/2009 9:06:36 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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no_doubt_delish
Beaumont, CA
age: 34
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You piss me off
I kick your balls
Be prepared your gonna crawl
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| 12/16/2009 1:39:29 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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snowflurry
South Yorkshire
United Kingdom
age: 38
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You are gone
something i said
whats going on
inside your head???
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| 12/16/2009 2:26:26 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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brockr23
Chandler, AZ
age: 34
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F**king b*tch,
You lied again,
In life you’ll twitch
‘Til painful end.
Lame, but hateful. 
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| 12/16/2009 8:44:25 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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poeticthunder
Spring, TX
age: 34
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just blow it out your silly rear
pull my finger
eyes will tear
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| 12/19/2009 10:10:50 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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rockondon
Prince George, BC
age: 37
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Here I sit,
pen in hand,
my ex girlfriend's shit,
I cannot stand.
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| 12/28/2009 9:38:34 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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My wish for you
That he lives a long life...
You deserve it.
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| 1/4/2010 11:03:19 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Here I sit,
pen in hand,
my ex girlfriend's shit,
I cannot stand.
Bravo- Beautiful, simplistic and to the point.
But most importantly: 13 on the dot
Great job.
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| 1/6/2010 5:08:42 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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He's a jerk.
Spending time
Jerking people around
who know he's a jerk.
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| 1/7/2010 9:05:27 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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babily123
Buffalo, MO
age: 47
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Your
infantile smile.
Hostile? reading
your profile.
Attitude?
Understood!
try
be as crude.
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| 1/8/2010 2:26:54 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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edlinked
Collegeville, PA
age: 42
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Cold, evil minds
Black, lying tongues
You devour pure innocence and the young
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| 1/10/2010 8:17:16 AM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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I know
you think
most people
are fools
I'm not.
Don't play me.
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| 1/16/2010 3:59:58 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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rachelray09
Flomaton, AL
age: 24
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let me try this:
you're such an ass
i can't believe
i couldn't see through
your mask
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| 1/22/2010 4:28:03 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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plmsprgsbunny
Pensacola, FL
age: 56
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Let me try that you did way good I Love it.
I Detest you
with the Red Hot
Intensity of
a Million
Shooting Stars.
The Bunny Kidding
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| 1/22/2010 5:53:14 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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sama_i_ama
Denver, CO
age: 29
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this is a challenge...im having issues making it be hateful...
you spit
whilst yelling.
drenching me
in your anger.
my tears are nothing...
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| 1/22/2010 7:42:11 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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this is a challenge...im having issues making it be hateful...
you spit
whilst yelling.
drenching me
in your anger.
my tears are nothing...
I thought this one was really great- the imagery is intense and descriptive.
A+
In fact I blinked, and there is a whole page full of really good ones here- I like them all.
plmsprgsbunny, Yours was by far my favorite. You have my permission to write my obituary when that assignment comes up!!
Kudos!
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| 1/22/2010 7:56:42 PM |
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sama_i_ama
Denver, CO
age: 29
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thank you very much
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| 1/24/2010 5:34:06 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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lickerpoet
Hialeah, FL
age: 49
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If morons could fly
the G O P logo
would be Dumbo.
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| 1/24/2010 7:51:45 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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hiker42
Colorado Springs, CO
age: 56
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Hate
Ate
Its' tail
No wail
Just a choking rage
with eyes bulging
Copyright Jan 2010 by Hiker 42
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| 1/24/2010 8:58:09 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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plmsprgsbunny
Pensacola, FL
age: 56
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Thank you OK
Well there You were... ... ...
clever...
for a while... ... ...
So I Feng Shuied You!!!
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| 1/24/2010 9:04:05 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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truckdriverjohn
Branson, MO
age: 53
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Why would I write 13 words for a lady who looks like turds?
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| 1/24/2010 9:07:05 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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How can you be
such an as*?
Have you always
been so rude?
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| 1/24/2010 9:11:59 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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truckdriverjohn
Branson, MO
age: 53
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How can you be
such an as*?
Have you always
been so rude?
I am rude, yes indeed, you are a fool high on weed.
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| 1/24/2010 9:46:19 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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Hey
TruckdriverJohn,
It's not always
about you.
You aren't
important enough
to me.
[Edited 1/24/2010 9:47:00 PM PST]
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| 1/25/2010 12:42:47 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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truckdriverjohn
Branson, MO
age: 53
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Hey
TruckdriverJohn,
It's not always
about you.
You aren't
important enough
to me.
Thank you
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