10/30/2009 9:16:00 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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This should put a nice spin on things since you guys like short love poems.
This one is all about short sweet and to the point!!!
Meet singles in your area, we're 100% free for everything! Join now!
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10/30/2009 10:17:44 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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artgurl_v2
Kamloops, BC
age: 42
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but I don't do 'hateful'
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10/30/2009 12:56:03 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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yourfriendbob
Fayette, OH
age: 55
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Just a note
To say goodbye.
As good women go,
You don't qualify.
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10/30/2009 1:25:47 PM |
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snowflurry
South Yorkshire
United Kingdom
age: 38
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but I don't do 'hateful'
Nope me neither..
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10/30/2009 1:40:46 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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yourfriendbob
Fayette, OH
age: 55
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Not my wife.
Not in my life.
Outta my bed.
Dearest, drop dead!
(Oh come on, it's fun.
Poetry should evoke an emotional reponse, and this is good practice.)..
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10/30/2009 2:17:15 PM |
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snowflurry
South Yorkshire
United Kingdom
age: 38
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The man above
He will find
Women avoid him
Aint that a bind.
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10/30/2009 2:27:28 PM |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Beautiful!! Thats what I was talking about!!!
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10/30/2009 2:27:28 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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elfqueen
Roff, OK
age: 56
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I've read your poems
there not to bright
laugh at some,others...dumb
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10/30/2009 2:49:21 PM |
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yourfriendbob
Fayette, OH
age: 55
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Never met
A witty Brit.
Little to say,
But their mouth won't quit.
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10/30/2009 8:12:01 PM |
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writer1776
Tucson, AZ
age: 52
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Gunner ! Tank ! Direct Front !
Identified !
Up !
Fire !
On the way !
Up !
Fire !
Fifty !
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10/30/2009 10:16:33 PM |
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zoe858
Houston, TX
age: 37
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The Fog
Don't quite get it
One minute they like you
The next....there gone
Men, there so indecisive
there minds are full of fog
They come on these sites
pretending...
to be something there not
With false hopes and dreams
Do they think were all dumb
Men, there so indecisive
there minds are full of fog
All rights reserved © 2009
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10/30/2009 10:18:15 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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zoe858
Houston, TX
age: 37
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13 yeah I forgot about that (hehehheheheh). Had to vent!!!!!
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10/31/2009 7:16:49 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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13 yeah I forgot about that (hehehheheheh). Had to vent!!!!!
Darned overachiever!!!!!
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10/31/2009 9:56:55 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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zoe858
Houston, TX
age: 37
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Who me....hehehheheh, never
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10/31/2009 10:08:18 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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amyjo29
Perkins, OK
age: 29
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You make me sick
......arrogant prick.
I hope you go
far down below.
Is that hateful enough?
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10/31/2009 11:47:18 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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You make me sick
......arrogant prick.
I hope you go
far down below.
Is that hateful enough?
That is great- just make sure they brush and floss before they go "Down below"
Do you know what I am saying???
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10/31/2009 1:16:27 PM |
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writer1776
Tucson, AZ
age: 52
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I hate your works
Disloyal E.T. jerks
Die with Satan
You're defeated !
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10/31/2009 6:57:24 PM |
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snowflurry
South Yorkshire
United Kingdom
age: 38
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Away we go
Down below
What will i find
I do'nt know.
No hate or malice in that just fancied writing a short poem!!
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10/31/2009 10:39:10 PM |
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artman23
Kaufman, TX
age: 60
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In your love
all I found was deception...
Thank heaven above
for contraception...
...artman
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10/31/2009 10:48:48 PM |
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artman23
Kaufman, TX
age: 60
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You stormed away into the darkness...
Now thanking God I had no flashlight.
...artman
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11/1/2009 1:20:50 AM |
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poeticthunder
Spring, TX
age: 34
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women,
brains.. rattled loose
wrapped around their crafty words
preparing their own noose
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11/1/2009 7:34:17 AM |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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I new this thread would get the creative juices flowing!!!
I was expecting more venting from the females, but so far mostly male takers.
Snowflurry doesnt have a hateful bone in her body, so I appreciate her willingness to participate- Good work. I liked it, kinda sounded like a bad date with a transvestite. LOL
Keep em coming, and dont be afraid to let that anger out!!!
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11/1/2009 7:35:53 AM |
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oceandive
Atlanta, GA
age: 52
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i don't do hateful....there is already quite enough of that in my life...good luck with this trhead...
but here is one nasty rhyme i learned form years of basic training from my brothers....
disclaimer: if you don't like gross, cursing or overall debauchery....DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER................
you hag,,,you bag,,,you slippy slimmy slut
you got fungis growing between your toes
and maggots crawling up your butt
before i'd climb those scaly legs
and kiss those festered tits
i'd drink a gallon of buzzard puke
and die of the drizzling shits
oops,,,i exceeded the 13 word rle....but i'm sure it fit the 'hate' bill
[Edited 11/1/2009 7:41:46 AM PST]
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11/1/2009 7:41:58 AM |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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i don't do hateful....there is already quite enough of that in my life...good luck with this trhead...
Well sounds me me like you have plenty of material and inspiration to write about.
Writing is about expressing ideas and emotions, and shouldnt be limited to just one happy feeling, or one similar set of emotions. This thread is about having fun, so obviously you DO do hateful, or you wouldnt have taken the time to read it or comment.
Rogue
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11/1/2009 8:38:10 AM |
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oceandive
Atlanta, GA
age: 52
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i actually 'read' many threads just for the education of them....even the ones that are distasteful or ugly can usually bring some form of education to me as far as understanding and knowing people....your post about me is a prime example....i didn't make up a poem about any of the dh people on here, nor anyone else...i simply posted the only nasty poem i know,,,in order to be on topic,,,that i learned in my childhood....you on the other hand....showed your hand of nastiness toward others....instead of stating something along the lines of 'ewww, nasty poem the military uses'....you decided to attack my intregrity and belittle me....so i guess that makes us even....one nasty to another..........
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11/1/2009 10:34:21 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Actually I was just commenting on the irony of you taking the time to post that you didnt do something, and then Immediately did it anyways. This thread is about fun posts that people wouldnt normally channel. I had the feeling that it would have a car- crash effect where everyone would stop and gawk for a moment. Some people just cant help themselves I suppose.
My remark wasnt an attack, in fact I was just agreeing with your own statement that you made, and suggesting that it could be used as inspiration or material.
i don't do hateful....there is already quite enough of that in my life...
Take it as you wish.
[Edited 11/1/2009 10:37:39 AM PST]
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11/1/2009 11:22:57 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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definitely_ltr
Tuscania
Italy
age: 48
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Scum! Scum!!
Men are scum!!!
Drivle! Drivle!!
Much said drivle!!!
Watch the load!!!!!
(of BS that is ... )
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11/1/2009 11:47:03 AM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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annie42100
Summerville, SC
age: 48
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Wow...I have to comment on the obvious.
The "love" challenge brought out a lot of heart felt creativity and talent and seemed, in whole, to be a positive thread. Even in the midst of some expressions of loss and pain.
The "hate" challenge brought out hurt feelings and anger after only two pages.
(Not to belittle the creative and innocent twist in the challenge!)
Just sitting here and reflecting on how this is a great (and accidental) example of how our lives and feelings are effected by what we surround ourselves with and how we choose to view those things.
Ok..sorry. Here's one:
Alas, we've reached
that final stage.
Say nothing, sit quietly,
Behold, 12 guage.
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11/1/2009 2:49:13 PM |
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yourfriendbob
Fayette, OH
age: 55
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Ok..sorry. Here's one:
Alas, we've reached
that final stage.
Say nothing, sit quietly,
Behold, 12 guage.
LOL.......THAT is great!...
Not very nice,
Although she was attractive.
If only birth control
Was retroactive.
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11/1/2009 4:29:13 PM |
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definitely_ltr
Tuscania
Italy
age: 48
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Remembering days of hand and foot,
What happened?!?
Men have such short-term memory!!!
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11/1/2009 4:37:41 PM |
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victor_fury
Albany, GA
age: 58
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no online posts
of my witty poetry
for writing ghosts
into intellectual piracy
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11/1/2009 6:18:39 PM |
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annie42100
Summerville, SC
age: 48
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LOL.......THAT is great!...
Thank you, Bob. I enjoyed your, too!
[Edited 11/1/2009 6:21:04 PM PST]
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11/1/2009 6:25:18 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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writer1776
Tucson, AZ
age: 52
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Love overcomes hate
Hate's dull knife rusts
You nearly died
Yet remained silent.
[Edited 11/1/2009 6:25:35 PM PST]
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11/1/2009 7:09:57 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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poeticthunder
Spring, TX
age: 34
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whining drives me
plum out of my mind
noncomplaining woman
hard to find
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11/2/2009 5:41:28 AM |
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snowflurry
South Yorkshire
United Kingdom
age: 38
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A life less ordinary
Time to reflect
I might be distant
Have respect.....
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11/2/2009 8:10:07 PM |
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amyjo29
Perkins, OK
age: 29
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Way too sad. Way too mad!
Damn! What a bad year I've had!
Does true love exist?
Starting to doubt.
Wondering what
this life is about.
This one is for you rogue...
Dallas Cowboy chearleaders
pretty as can be.
How original to be on T.V.
HaHa. Just teasing you.. Here's one more...
Slightly bitter.
Slightly jaded.
Prissy girls beware...
your looks will soon be faded.
Wow...I must be bored!
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11/5/2009 9:48:46 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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You have no idea how easy this will be for me today!
You will never be
Anything more than yourself
And that is terribly sad.
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11/6/2009 2:21:05 AM |
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maspannik
Claremore, OK
age: 26
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You flash pretty, empty smiles
Wrapped in wicked wonder, wiles
Worthless to me
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11/7/2009 8:23:10 PM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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Zucchini isn't good,
Something I dread
Please, a favor,
Bake it in bread.
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11/9/2009 1:14:55 PM |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Final blows
Death throws
Jugular flows
Like a crimson rose
Between my toes.
I really hate Mondays.
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11/9/2009 8:31:52 PM |
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satinsky2
Charlotte, NC
age: 60
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Thought you were my life
I became your wife
Lead a life of strife.
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11/11/2009 10:37:12 PM |
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celticdelight
South Jordan, UT
age: 41
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Why hate remains
When love's through
The emotion's the same:
All about you
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11/12/2009 3:23:19 PM |
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noothernicole
Mayfield, KY
age: 29
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Repulsive World!
Repulsively Sick!
It's To Unfit!
Because It's Full Of Lunatic Shit!
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11/14/2009 4:15:42 PM |
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writer1776
Tucson, AZ
age: 52
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Why hate remains
When love's through
The emotion's the same:
All about you
Remarkable Emerald Isle Lass ! By your leave:
My hate remains
My love survives pains
Love and Hate the same:
You
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11/16/2009 7:08:51 PM |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Foolish Girl,
Riding Her Vicious Cycle
Tank Empty
Sidecar Attached
Overflowing with Baggage!
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11/16/2009 8:22:32 PM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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Sue made high school
a real challenge.
I wish her similar
challenges
in her life.
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11/16/2009 11:38:34 PM |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Sue made high school
a real challenge.
I wish her similar
challenges
in her life.
Wrong thread- that isnt Hateful or thirteen words. Better try again
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11/17/2009 3:58:00 AM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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Oh,it is hateful. I thought it was 15 like the oppposite thread on love.
Here's hateful
What a jerk
You appear to be,
mind our own business
times three.
Better?
[Edited 11/17/2009 3:58:25 AM PST]
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11/18/2009 12:08:24 PM |
Even More Challenging: Write a Hateful Poem in 13 words! |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Oh,it is hateful. I thought it was 15 like the oppposite thread on love.
Here's hateful
What a jerk
You appear to be,
mind our own business
times three.
Better?
Well it's 13 words, but the "times three" Made it come to an abrubt awkward halt.
I've read your Limericks, You can still do better than that.
P.S.
Appearances decieving
Required corrections
I wouldnt be a jerk
If you followed directions!!
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11/18/2009 10:02:29 PM |
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celticdelight
South Jordan, UT
age: 41
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Sue made high school
a real challenge.
I wish her similar
challenges
in her life.
Thank you annamranna! I see the hate you wrote, and I'll willingly cut it to 13 for you to meet Rogue's rules:
Sue made high school
real challenging.
I wish her similar
challenges
in life.
Rogue, it is obvious you've never dealt with mean girls in high school. This really is a gem, and wickedly amusing.
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11/19/2009 7:59:36 AM |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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Thank you annamranna! I see the hate you wrote, and I'll willingly cut it to 13 for you to meet Rogue's rules:
Sue made high school
real challenging.
I wish her similar
challenges
in life.
Rogue, it is obvious you've never dealt with mean girls in high school. This really is a gem, and wickedly amusing.
I married my high school sweetheart- She was the meanest nastiest one of them all. Thats why I married her, It was the only way to get back at her!! LOL
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11/19/2009 2:28:34 PM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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Roguewriter, I knew you were teasing!
I;ll be back, later....
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11/19/2009 4:11:38 PM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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Thank you Celtic Delight.
You may think
You are smarter than me,
But no one else does.
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11/19/2009 10:19:15 PM |
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elfqueen
Roff, OK
age: 56
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your mean
so steamed
dont scream
i mean
yourcrazy
it seems
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11/23/2009 12:10:40 AM |
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celticdelight
South Jordan, UT
age: 41
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You spit spite
You're always right
I take flight
Come dark of night
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11/23/2009 3:19:24 PM |
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danae58
Lakewood, OH
age: 58
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Blood runs cold
Run and hide
Evil men out
Young innocent fly high
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11/23/2009 7:22:36 PM |
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polywoman
Magna, UT
age: 67
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You left.
Married your cousin,
I'm finally free.
You both go to hell..
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11/23/2009 8:22:04 PM |
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heartsanflowers
Bowling Green, KY
age: 57
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You lie like a dog,
But you look like a frog,
How's that?
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11/23/2009 8:36:36 PM |
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roguewriter
Oklahoma City, OK
age: 37
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You lie like a dog,
But you look like a frog,
How's that?
Well, it was only 11 words, but easily rectified. you just forgot to use adjectives.
You lie like a mongrel dog
but you look like a bloated frog.
Easily fixed. just my suggestions, you may use your own adjectives of course.
You left.
Married your cousin,
I'm finally free.
You both go to hell..
ROTFLMAO
Dont hold back polywoman- tell us how you really feel LOL.
I havent contributed to my own thread so here is one from my heart.
Rehab may have cured your addictions,
But you are still a Heinous B*tch
[Edited 11/23/2009 8:40:21 PM PST]
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11/23/2009 9:25:05 PM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
age: 55
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It's sad...
you don't know me
well enough to know
who I am.
In a crowd
with family
all around,
is not
my cup of tea.
To know me
is to......
I want the first time
to be special.
Not like in a
theatre
with people
watching me.
It is not me.
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