cindyms32117
Daytona Beach, FL
age: 42
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ARE YOU REAL
I stare at you on a computer screen
I think of things that you could mean
I pray you are who you say you are
not some weirdo from afar
I dream ,dreams as if they are
but yet scared to go to far
to let my heart open to an unknown face
to someone in a unknown place
finely I open up and let you in
tell you all my deepest darkest sins
then when were to meet face to face
you disappear without a trace.
to leave me broken hearted
and to wish I had never started
to look for love on a computer screen.
written by me Cindy s.
[Edited 2/9/2008 2:50:14 PM]
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truegrace
Hagerstown, MD
age: 52
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all to well
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dreambuilder07
Gaithersburg, MD
age: 48
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The image is wonderful and right on point. I often worry myself about falling for a photo. It's just wrong. With perspective you know this too. Voice on the phone tells you more -- yet not enough. Ms. Gone sailing posted in another thread about the getting to know you phase -- and that's all that can truly be accomplished here. For my attraction to be legitimate -- I need to be in the same room. How can you know the smell/the eyes/the hair/the facial ticks/the energy -- without being face to face.
It takes strength I can't always muster.
Critism for the poetic rhyme and meter is not what I felt you'd really want, so I'll save that till you ask
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bayougirl6969
Marrero, LA
age: 47
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I can relate to this poem too well,good poem
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lars38
Silvis, IL
age: 39
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Yeah ,I can relate .I walked away from a wonderful person on here,this is probably exactly how she feels.That is the one thing i really regret.
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emmycoe
Hanson, KY
age: 30
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wow cindy.....
that's exactly what i've been cryin about for the last 5 days.
thanks for writing that.....
gotta love how people can just fall off the face of your earth...with no explanation......
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