6/24/2014 6:14:55 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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Okay look and tell me.
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6/24/2014 6:18:19 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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Best advice I can give is to read some of the other posts and see what they been told, you have all the same mistakes, bad main pic, say nothing really about yourself so the woman can see if your what they want or not, ......
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6/24/2014 6:28:06 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
48, joined Apr. 2013
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Thanks for changing you main picture...that dark lighting will get you skipped every time.
You really need a head shot with you smiling...get a friend to take it.
Just so you know I read the entire profile and found a man with some college to not have a command of the English language. Many mistakes with punctuation, sentence structure, when the word a or an is used...you might want to fix that because it is indicative of a Nigerian catfish...especially when your first sentences has your name...Sam I am.if you can fix that stuff then I will review with more suggestions...if not...then I will think you are a faker!
Best wishes.
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6/24/2014 6:46:47 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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Okay going redo it. Not a fake. Lol
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6/24/2014 6:58:47 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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Redone. Lol.... Thanks for being honest with me.
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6/24/2014 7:09:47 PM |
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majic_1
Broomfield, CO
56, joined Dec. 2010
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Would you be willing to date a 57 year old woman?
That's what the 27 year old girls will think about when they look at you.
Who are the 2 quotes from at the bottom of your profile? If you said it they don't need to be quoted. If someone else said it you need to credit them for it.
But neither of the 2 paragraphs says shit about who you are and what makes you a great catch so I would delete them both.
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6/24/2014 8:18:13 PM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
52, joined Aug. 2010
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So, have you decided if you and the woman you've been with for 10 months are a couple yet? That will kinda help us figure out how to direct suggestions.
In the meantime...
"Brutally honest" usually means rude and tactless. Honest is fine if you can do it tactfully or with sensitivity. Otherwise, it's just being mean. I would hope you know the difference.
You have potential in your writing, but need to break it up into a few more paragraphs to be an easier read.
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6/24/2014 8:32:17 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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Oh them past posts, sure do rear their ugly head at the worst times
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6/24/2014 8:59:29 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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So, have you decided if you and the woman you've been with for 10 months are a couple yet? That will kinda help us figure out how to direct suggestions.
In the meantime...
"Brutally honest" usually means rude and tactless. Honest is fine if you can do it tactfully or with sensitivity. Otherwise, it's just being mean. I would hope you know the difference.
You have potential in your writing, but need to break it up into a few more paragraphs to be an easier read.
no we aren't a couple never will be! Hell with her. Check out others forums. You will see why.
I'll change things on my profile which the topic here. Lol.
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6/24/2014 9:02:16 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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Problem is man them posts are part of your profile, just ones you can't change and often times say much more about a person than what they say in a rehearsed script
i've made some boo boo's just being funny that jumped up and bit me in the ass, your not the first, last, or only one to do it
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6/24/2014 9:27:32 PM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
52, joined Aug. 2010
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That was one of the first posts I saw when I checked your history. Wanna bet anyone else checking you out is going to think the same thing and delete your message without going any further? Keep in mind ALL your posts in ALL the Forums are permanently attached to your profile for anyone to read.
I look forward to the edited version.
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6/24/2014 9:34:30 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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Delete my messages, pleas explain.
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6/24/2014 10:08:26 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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Delete my messages, pleas explain.
Normally when you message a woman they will check your profile and posting history before they ever even read the message, they find something they don't like and the message gets deleted without even being read
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6/24/2014 10:26:52 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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How do I delete them" post" or messages?
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6/24/2014 10:29:34 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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You can't delete the posts unless you delete your profile
If you do that make sure in the future you post nothing that can bite you later
and by all means never post to sex and dating or sex and dating chat, that was my downfall, ended what started out to be a really good thing with a beauty that only lived 100 miles away, dn the sad thing was it was just a joke
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6/24/2014 11:36:14 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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I am not shamed of what I post cause I don't hide behind them. I did and will stand up on them.
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6/25/2014 2:01:35 AM |
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peachy1954
Sacramento, CA
60, joined Oct. 2010
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Think I would rearrange the one paragraph to the end since it sounds like your close then you say more.
Evidently the lead shot is and update and it is pretty good. I think I would delete the shot with out a shirt. It is one thing if you are standing by a lawn mower or on the beach but if it looks like a selfie it is kind of not the greatest impression.
Actually like the quotes. It changes the over all tone of your profile which if rested only on your photos comes off a little more hostile that I think you are on a day to day basis. Smiling in photos doesn't revoke your man card. lol
If you have some really bad faux-pas in your posts, I don't go into that, you might want to either explain or excuse yourself which ever is appropriate. "To thine own self be true." Admitting you are human and sometimes react with out thinking would not be terminal. Most people get if you have a "drama" in your life you might have a bad moment or two but if your response was over the top you are going to have to deal with it because smart folks do research posts.
I am not a big believer in deleting profiles. For one thing you can delete a profile and someone can still find it so it is not really going away.
Anyway that is my two cents worth on the subject. Hopefully it is helpful.
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6/25/2014 2:05:46 AM |
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kerri36inky
Louisville, KY
39, joined Mar. 2012
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I am not shamed of what I post cause I don't hide behind them. I did and will stand up on them.
Well said amen to that its called being real....
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6/25/2014 7:59:09 AM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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I am not shamed of what I post cause I don't hide behind them. I did and will stand up on them.
Yea Yea that sounds great and everything but the reality of it is you don't get the chance to stand up for or explain what was going on, the women have so many choices most of the time they just delete and move on to someone that isn't as "Real"
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6/25/2014 9:48:32 AM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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Okay redone it once again. Lol. Thanks trying to be better. I'm not perfect but I want to be real as I can. Don't want to copy anyone else for I'm me. One and only.
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6/25/2014 10:25:03 AM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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It's hard as crap top do, I know I'm going through the same thing with my own profile over haul right now, but seriously it works much better if yu have NOTHING negative in your profile
An example of that is where you say what your looking for and in the first sentence you have to say someone thats NOT yadda yadda. Why used NOT in what you want? See how saying I want a woman who is proud of herself and her accomplishments sounds so so much better than someone who isn't going to hide herself?
Sounds stupid I know, but in online dating the people look more for a reason to not talk to you than they do for a reason they should
That post that was mentioned before, about the 10 month woman. granted I'm not a woman, but I'd bet my last dollar they will think to themselves one of a few things
A you don't have guts enough to say what you feel and only say what you think you can get away wioth
B Your so unsure of yourself you don't think you were worth trying to make it official
C you need to ask your friends approval before they will be accepted
On and On not trying to fry you but I have been on here a very long time and have seen posts from the women I learned from, Kind of like how MOST of them won't write back if your grammar sucks, they think your stupid and don't give you a chance, never take into account some of us type like we talk and use cuz, ya, etc...
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6/25/2014 11:28:59 AM |
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badchevy4x4babe
Fort Worth, TX
25, joined May. 2011
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Nothing in your profile says anything about you. Your pictures are all dark sad-fests complete with frowns and evil glares. Even if you were in my age range, I would steer very clear.
Either you truly are negative and sad and angry all the time or you need to totally redo EVERYTHING on your profile to convey a more accurate picture of who you are and what your life is like
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6/25/2014 5:14:28 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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Thanks for the review good or bad but I am going go with what I got. I'm happy with it.
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6/25/2014 5:44:56 PM |
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frank_underwood
Columbia, SC
58, joined Jun. 2013
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5'10" & 190: BMI=27.3, you're not average, you're overweight, belly-boy
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6/25/2014 6:07:03 PM |
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ksgreasemonkey
Junction City, KS
32, joined Aug. 2013
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Thanks for the review good or bad but I am going go with what I got. I'm happy with it.
Then why ask for opinions if not changing things? Thats like going in for surgery and then telling them yeah i just wanted to see what youd say rather than fix an issue.
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6/25/2014 6:20:04 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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I did changed it three times.
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6/25/2014 8:43:46 PM |
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frank_underwood
Columbia, SC
58, joined Jun. 2013
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I did changed it three times.
OP, can you correct your grammar?
How about here?
Thanks the visit here some milk and cookies for you'all.
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6/25/2014 10:38:18 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
48, joined Apr. 2013
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I think the saying is to err is human. Not to era is human!
Err means make a mistake.
Era is a period of time.
You might want to correct that.
My worthless 2 cents!
Best wishes.
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6/25/2014 10:40:42 PM |
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badchevy4x4babe
Fort Worth, TX
25, joined May. 2011
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there's lots more ERAs than just those few grammatical ones.
apparently OP is really an uneducated, lazy, dark, brooding guy. it definitely comes across!!! KUDOS!!!
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6/25/2014 10:55:57 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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there's lots more ERAs than just those few grammatical ones.
apparently OP is really an uneducated, lazy, dark, brooding guy. it definitely comes across!!! KUDOS!!!
Yes I'm eduacted sweetheart, but grammar isn't my best subject. Okay. Now not trying to be mean okay. Lazy nah sweetheart I am doing what I can with an injury foot. Nerve damage from a fall back in 2007. Due to faulty step where I lived at the time. As for dark yea okay I'm little dark but we are different peoplein this world. Yes iI do smile when I feel like it. Not evil or cruel. As I said before you shouldn't a book by it's cover cause you just might miss a very good read. Now I am not saying I'm that but really you shouldn't do that. .
Now the saying I used with the word era is right looking up okay. Thanks for your opinion and it is noted. Will take it as good advice.
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6/25/2014 11:09:29 PM |
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badchevy4x4babe
Fort Worth, TX
25, joined May. 2011
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then put an accurate cover on the front of your book so someone WILL take the time to read it.
you wouldn't put a fluffy bunnies and Santa cover on a book that is dark and brooding.
likewise you wouldn't put a violent blood drawing battle scene on a book about fluffy bunnies and Santa.
so why are you justifying having a profile that shows THE worst sides to you?
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6/25/2014 11:12:01 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
48, joined Apr. 2013
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Yes I'm eduacted sweetheart, but grammar isn't my best subject. Okay. Now not trying to be mean okay. Lazy nah sweetheart I am doing what I can with an injury foot. Nerve damage from a fall back in 2007. Due to faulty step where I lived at the time. As for dark yea okay I'm little dark but we are different peoplein this world. Yes iI do smile when I feel like it. Not evil or cruel. As I said before you shouldn't a book by it's cover cause you just might miss a very good read. Now I am not saying I'm that but really you shouldn't do that. .
Now the saying I used with the word era is right looking up okay. Thanks for your opinion and it is noted. Will take it as good advice.
Okay I googled...to era Is human....the search corrected me .... To err is human.
You do what you want...but you did say you have poor grammar so I was just correcting one thing for you that was silly.
You know women pass men by because of just a few little things...going through profiles is like picking fruit at the grocery store...one little thing wrong and you just pick a different one that is more pleasing, not so bruised, not too soft, not too hard...you get the analogy? If I have good grammar and can spell...then I want a man that has good grammar and can spell...or at least one that has the intelligence to use a word program and run spell check! I do not want to try to figure out what he is writing me!
Best wishes though...hope your foot gets better.
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6/25/2014 11:13:55 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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I'm not perfect nor claimed to be. God is only one had rights to claimed that. Not trying be pefect, just being me. Like for whom I am or move on. Not rich nor every be. I am here where God wants me to be that where I will be. I have food for my family and a car to get where I need to go" if I don't waste it" not going say that what I done was a waste but I have learnee a lesson from it. You can care for someone but they got be worth your time. She was at the time, now moving on. No regrets or will be. Sorry for the rant.
Best wishes and may all your dreams come true.
Thewwolf.
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6/25/2014 11:15:06 PM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
52, joined Aug. 2010
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Now I am not saying I'm that but really you shouldn't do that.
But we do. And that's the bottom line. If you only get one chance at a first impression, why sabotage yourself? You've been given advice on how to make a better first impression, it's obviously up to you to choose to use it and improve your chances, or NOT use it and hope for a one-in-a-bazillion lightning strike. Don't hold your breath, though.
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6/25/2014 11:15:35 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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I'm not perfect nor claimed to be. God is only one had rights to claimed that. Not trying be pefect, just being me. Like for whom I am or move on. Not rich nor every be. I am here where God wants me to be that where I will be. I have food for my family and a car to get where I need to go" if I don't waste it" not going say that what I done was a waste but I have learnee a lesson from it. You can care for someone but they got be worth your time. She was at the time, now moving on. No regrets or will be. Sorry for the rant.
Best wishes and may all your dreams come true.
Thewwolf.
Just relax man, but use this as proof what i told you about the women will find a reason not to talk to you rather than look for a reason they should. I been here longer than this profile says and I've literally read tens of thousands of profiles and all the comments made on all of them
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6/25/2014 11:17:23 PM |
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badchevy4x4babe
Fort Worth, TX
25, joined May. 2011
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But we do. And that's the bottom line. If you only get one chance at a first impression, why sabotage yourself? You've been given advice on how to make a better first impression, it's obviously up to you to choose to use it and improve your chances, or NOT use it and hope for a one-in-a-bazillion lightning strike. Don't hold your breath, though.
i almost thought you said "one-in-a-BAZINGA"
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6/25/2014 11:19:04 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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the difference between these women and the normal ones is they are telling you what turns them away, the rest just delete and move on without saying why
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6/25/2014 11:20:26 PM |
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badchevy4x4babe
Fort Worth, TX
25, joined May. 2011
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but what do we know, hick ...
we're just silly wimmins ... we don't know nothing 'bout this confangled interweb dating ...
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6/25/2014 11:22:28 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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Just show some skin and be buried in messages right?
Speakking of which I need to send you a message was looking through my old pics before
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6/25/2014 11:28:42 PM |
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badchevy4x4babe
Fort Worth, TX
25, joined May. 2011
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i was buried in messages when i was all proper with all my clothes on. nothing's changed.
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6/25/2014 11:32:56 PM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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thats what happens when ya give your digits to a perv
drunk texting is no good
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6/25/2014 11:33:30 PM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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Okay as for the err and era thing. The way you see it is "to err to human and forgive....something"
Now I mean something different. Thanks for letting me see that. Respect that from you. Again thanks.
As for anothers remarks I respect that from you'all "hillbilly talk" might not be right either. As I said I am little dark. But are each different in this world. That what makes this world up. not perfect nor claimed to be
Again thanks . not hi but bye.
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6/26/2014 12:18:25 AM |
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thewwolf
Wallins Creek, KY
42, joined May. 2014
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Okay fixed all the eras and done now.
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6/26/2014 6:44:34 AM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
48, joined Apr. 2013
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Okay fixed all the eras and done now.
You forgot to save it...not fixed at all!
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6/26/2014 8:11:07 AM |
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righttwix
Rock Springs, WY
46, joined Oct. 2013
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You forgot to save it...not fixed at all!
I had to keep hitting the back button and saving all my changes twice yesterday to get it to stay
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