| 2/18/2015 8:19:16 PM |
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har15280
Salt Lake City, UT
25, joined Jun. 2013
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Ladies especially good criticism
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| 2/18/2015 8:20:51 PM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
52, joined Aug. 2010
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Friends, long term relationship if I find the right person.
Seriously?
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| 2/18/2015 8:26:12 PM |
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har15280
Salt Lake City, UT
25, joined Jun. 2013
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For sure just being honest, if it doesn't work like as a relationship, not totally opposed to meeting new friends. I'm new to my state.
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| 2/18/2015 10:14:37 PM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
52, joined Aug. 2010
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Allow me to be more specific.
Let us know when you've made an effort so there is actually something to review. Perhaps read a few of the other threads here so you can what errors are made over and over and to help distinguish what attention wh*res look like so you can avoid them.
Then you can post back to THIS thread instead of making duplicates.
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| 2/18/2015 10:39:29 PM |
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mccirrus
Carmel, IN
36, joined Nov. 2010
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Oh nice! An uno sentence profile! Great success!!!
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| 2/19/2015 4:10:36 AM |
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joe182121
Bourbonnais, IL
63, joined Aug. 2013
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Have you ever heard of punctuation? As it stands at the moment, you have one run-on sentence, however it is so discombobulated, I can't, in all fairness call it a sentence.
It's like you just vomited a bunch of random thoughts. Even ladies from the bottom of the barrel are likely to be able to read. This is undecipherable without taking the reader serious time to TRY to figure out what you have in this so called profile.
No serious reader will make that much of an effort...
Shirtless selfies and bathroom ones as well all need to go.
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| 2/19/2015 6:36:46 AM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
48, joined Apr. 2013
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I'm not sure what to think about a clock on the wall in the bathroom next to family photos.
Definitely not reminiscent of a 24 year old straight male living on his own out in the world.
Like that you have a hairdryer...do men really use them?
I do see you love your tattoos. So much that you need to post them on a dating site to garner attention.
I always wonder why people tattoo lyrics or popular quotes on their body? Open your closed mind, close your open mouth....guess you can't learn from someone you hate. In 20 years you will see how foolish this one is...you can learn from everyone, even those you don't like or hate.
Love music and plays several instruments but not one photo of you with any instrument. Hmmm. But hey I can tell you are handy with the ladder....it almost looks like you are enamored with the other man in that photo too.
The profile lacks punctuation. What you wrote can mean different things depending on where the reader puts the period.
Good luck.
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| 2/19/2015 9:32:27 AM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
52, joined Aug. 2010
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For sure just being honest, if it doesn't work like as a relationship, not totally opposed to meeting new friends.
This is common sense. Is your ultimate goal to meet a wonderful lady as a romantic partner? Or to be forever friend-zoned by everyone you meet?
If you are just looking for friends, there's no need to scare them off by saying you could turn into a Stage 5 Clinger at some point. Then you can both continue to date other people along the way.
If you are ultimately looking for a romantic partner, no need to mention the friends stuff. Again, if you meet up with someone and she finds she has no romantic attraction to you, you can mutually decide to hang out as friends while you continue to date other people. Common sense, no need to put it in your profile.
By the way - why would you waste your/her time hanging out as friends if you were ultimately looking for one partner? Don't you have friends already? There are three women attached to your profile now - are you chatting with them? If not, why are they there?
Good Gawd fix that damn punctuation. You're not 12.
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| 2/19/2015 10:03:42 AM |
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picassotrigger
Pittsburgh, PA
58, joined Mar. 2014
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Good grief, OP, I'll rewrite it for ya:
I moved to Utah in 2013 and it's been a rough transition but finally the pieces are falling in place.
I love music and am musically inclined. I play guitar, a little bit of piano and violin and I love to produce music using Ableton 8.
I love Mexican and Chinese food and sushi is my favorite. Time spent with family is important to me, even better when I spend it shooting pool, bowling, riding ATVs, camping or just being outside enjoying the great outdoors.
Life is good and would be better if experienced in the company of that special someone!
Ok, this is bare-bones, but is a far cry better than what you have up now.
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| 2/19/2015 6:24:17 PM |
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josfsd06
Sioux Falls, SD
56, joined Mar. 2014
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Have you ever heard of punctuation?
I'm beginning to believe grammar is no longer taught in public school, Joe. Most of these jokers think a period is only something a woman has once a month. Their biggest concern is that they'll have to keep their d*ck in their pants for a week.
They can't even spell coherent communication. They certainly don't know what it means!
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| 2/19/2015 6:30:11 PM |
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doubletrouble77
Crete, IL
37, joined May. 2011
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A one sentence profile.wow just wow.
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| 2/19/2015 7:39:53 PM |
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josfsd06
Sioux Falls, SD
56, joined Mar. 2014
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The real kicker, Double, is that with proper punctuation, it would have been a two sentence profile.
Opie is another illiterate dumbass.
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| 2/19/2015 9:38:20 PM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
52, joined Aug. 2010
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Joe and Jos, you guys should know better. He only wanted responses from Hos.
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| 2/20/2015 12:39:27 AM |
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mccirrus
Carmel, IN
36, joined Nov. 2010
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The real kicker, Double, is that with proper punctuation, it would have been a two sentence profile.
Opie is another illiterate dumbass.
 
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| 2/20/2015 5:15:08 PM |
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josfsd06
Sioux Falls, SD
56, joined Mar. 2014
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Joe and Jos, you guys should know better. He only wanted responses from Hos.
Indeed, Forums. We can add spelling to his list of shortcomings.
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| 2/20/2015 6:15:26 PM |
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lily_bblove
Orlando, FL
20, joined Nov. 2013
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looks good to me
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| 2/20/2015 7:09:37 PM |
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josfsd06
Sioux Falls, SD
56, joined Mar. 2014
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It just gets harder and harder to argue against forced sterilization!
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| 2/21/2015 4:00:09 AM |
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frank_underwood
Columbia, SC
59, joined Jun. 2013
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har15280
Pisces Horse (1990)
yin water & yang fire
a drug addict meets headstrong
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| 2/21/2015 5:02:47 AM |
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joe182121
Bourbonnais, IL
63, joined Aug. 2013
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Joe and Jos, you guys should know better. He only wanted responses from Hos.
He's gonna get the bottom of the barrel, if he gets anything. But then again as you suggested, he'll be happy as a clam.....
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