scottiemoe
Camp Lejeune, NC
age: 21
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well im new to this so i wanted to know what people think of my profile and see what people think and how i could make it better thanks
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_majic_
Broomfield, CO
age: 51
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OK, here’s the deal mister man…
I don’t even know what you look like due to your shitty pictures! And if the old man can’t tell WTF you look like, neither will the girls. So your first priority is to get 6-8 GOOD pictures of you posted up here. They will be about 80% of your profile so make them great ones. The main one should be a nice clear face shot without glasses or hats or helmets. And do not forget to smile showing your teeth ok?
Your profile text needs to be expanded. 3-4 paragraphs with a few sentences each. A couple about you and what you are into, talk about your hobbies etc. and what you like to do for fun. Then a short paragraph about your girl. Always talk in positive terms about you and your girl and do NOT focus on her physical traits like how big her boobs need to be to make you a happy boy. Just talk about the personality traits that you like.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation count. Use a word processor to type all this text in and cut and paste it to your profile.
Add more interests to total up to about 12-15 or so… with several of them “couple friendly” ones. These are used by the site to match you up to others that have similar interests and also will give the girl an idea of what you could do on a date together.
Thank you for serving our country son. It is appreciated by me a lot.
Best of luck to you!
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shilli
Fairbanks, AK
age: 45
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Really? "Marine" is Always capitalized. You don't have to correct that but I would.
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countrylady53
Terrell, TX
age: 56
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You definitely need to work on your profile if you want this to work for you.
I agree with what the other reviewers have said. You can probably get somebody to help you with your pics. The one in fatigues might stay, but lose the others. The main pic is blurry and the ones in the shades and hat do not flatter you. I can tell you're a good looking guy, let the girls see that.
If you're not sure what to put in your profile, look at others and you'll get a better idea of what to include.
Thank you for what you do for us every day.
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ron10000
Brighton, MI
age: 63
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I have noticed that on this site the profile writing tips are quite vague and include many contradictory comments.
The basic idea of a profile is to be an inviting advertisement for you. It should start with a well lit, close-up head and shoulders photo with a bright smile. That is what draws in people to read what you have written. Include at least one full length shot so the viewer can determine your body type. Other photos to show you in various locations and activities are always good.
[Your primary photo is way too dark]
The profile should be easy to read, I notice that very dark background colors make it very difficult and I pass those by. Proper spelling and grammar do count, if I need to spend a great deal of time to decipher a profile not only is it not a fun read but makes the writer seem less than intelligent. Spell and grammar check programs take care of most of this.
[Yours is black but at least you use whit print so it can be read]
Include 10 to 15 interests not only does it say you are not a couch potato but gives potential points of contact (shared interests).
[You list several but add more that can be done as a couple]
Profile body should include a paragraph about who you are one about your interests and another indicating the characteristics you seek in a partner. Make sure you have paragraph spacing for ease of reading.
[You need more in this area]
What about the initial email (which the guy almost always has to send).
Try this approach.
Subject line: use something from her profile that you find of interest or that you have in common. Never use Hi or some variation of that.
Email body: expand on the subject and ask one or two related questions. This is not an interrogation but an attempt to break the ice. The whole thing should be at most 5 lines.
Sign off with just your first name.
All the best, thanks for serving! You are one of the good ones.
Ron
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