| 3/13/2014 11:14:39 AM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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I just wanted to put myself back out there and hope there would be someone interested in conversing with a man such as myself.
my old profile got deleted a year back I was know as asianbeachboy.
So I hope you like what you see!^_^
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| 3/13/2014 11:52:59 AM |
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britishguy1
Purcellville, VA
57, joined Jan. 2008
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Your profile is very destructive.
It's very hard to read because you have not used any paragraphs or line breaks.
You sound very needy, which is unattractive to women.
First you should never mention previous relationships, secondly get rid of the featured friends. Why are you not dating one of them?
This is a dating site not face book. Lose all this self pity about stuff you deserve to be happy etc. Writing things about how much you will do for a woman , makes you seem very insecure.
There is nothing wrong with having respect being polite and displaying chivalry. Although you have taken it to a new level.
Your photographs are all similar,you should have more light, and at least one full body shot. Don't wear hats or sun glasses in your main photograph.
You should not list your wage/salary bracket, that is your business. You should take a look at the dating age range too. It looks creepy you would date an 18 year old but not anyone your age or older.
Summary. Delete this whole profile and start again
A well structured profile should have the following.
Part one, Write details about you
Part two,List some hobbies/interests/goals/dreams/ achievements and ambitions
Part three,write about the type of woman you are looking for
Good luck
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| 3/13/2014 11:57:42 AM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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Sigh, well then...ok I guess I should just change myself completely
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| 3/13/2014 12:10:29 PM |
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britishguy1
Purcellville, VA
57, joined Jan. 2008
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Sigh, well then...ok I guess I should just change myself completely
It's not about changing you as a person, it's about changing things within your profile. This is profile review not person review, I gave a review based on the information at hand. It's nothing personal,I gave my input and advice, whether you choose to take it, that's your prerogative.
[Edited 3/13/2014 12:11:53 PM ]
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| 3/13/2014 12:12:38 PM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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But you guys are not women lol
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| 3/13/2014 12:13:56 PM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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It's not about changing you as a person, it's about changing things within your profile. This is profile review not person review, I gave a review based on the information at hand. It's nothing personal,I gave my input and advice, whether you choose to take it, that's your prerogative.
I dont know how to start talking about myself without sounding corny and fake other than the way I just did..
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| 3/13/2014 12:49:35 PM |
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riflessivo
AlmafuerteStaffordshire
United Kingdom
43, joined Jan. 2014
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I am though, but as you've put under construction I have nothing to work with 
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| 3/13/2014 1:09:05 PM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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There I fixed it.
hope its to your standards
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| 3/13/2014 1:24:26 PM |
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riflessivo
AlmafuerteStaffordshire
United Kingdom
43, joined Jan. 2014
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Ready?  Let's roll...grab onto your boxers
About Me
First of all hello to the viewers of my profile,
Nooo, don't do that that sounds like urm bad, ladies man.
Look from this point the difference of what you wrote and what I did. Compare with your profile.
I'm man with a big heart and ambitions . I like the fine arts of any given type especially music, this is my passion. Im a lyricist, vocalist and rapper. Im very romantic and I have respect for women
I work in retail. I enjoy my job but, I'm looking at other areas of where I could apply my skills and put them to better use.
This is an idea. You still have a lot of work to do I'm sorry 
[Edited 3/13/2014 1:24:47 PM ]
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| 3/13/2014 1:36:57 PM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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This is stressful but thank u everyone.
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| 3/13/2014 1:42:56 PM |
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riflessivo
AlmafuerteStaffordshire
United Kingdom
43, joined Jan. 2014
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It's difficult I'll agree, so you can send the right message to the right people.
Good luck 
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| 3/13/2014 1:45:28 PM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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So youre saying I shouldn't tell about my passion for music and replace that with how much I love my retail job and want to expand my horizons basicaly by putting my akills to a greater use?
Im sorry but im a lil confused on how to take this advice, im not very good at this but I still wana show personality and something different in me than the other guys.
And relationships are usuaally long termso im not used to marketing myself.
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| 3/13/2014 2:14:52 PM |
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riflessivo
AlmafuerteStaffordshire
United Kingdom
43, joined Jan. 2014
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So youre saying I shouldn't tell about my passion for music
No, that's why I put this I like the fine arts of any given type especially music, this is my passion. Im a lyricist, vocalist and rapper.
and replace that with how much I love my retail job and want to expand my horizons basicaly by putting my akills to a greater use?
No that's why I refined it to I work in retail. I enjoy my job but, I'm looking at other areas of where I could apply my skills and put them to better use. because you said about applying yourself to other areas such as massage. It gives it more direction. We like direction.
Im sorry but im a lil confused on how to take this advice, im not very good at this but I still wana show personality and something different in me than the other guys.
And relationships are usuaally long termso im not used to marketing myself.
If I wrote your profile for you, it wouldn't be you so I won't be. I am only trying to point you in the right direction.
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| 3/13/2014 2:43:45 PM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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Ok I see what you mean now.
its kind of like when I write a song and I have to revise it because I add a lot of unnecessary words that just dont flow properly.
and I understand and I took everyones advice and hopefully things work out for me!
thanks
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| 3/13/2014 3:25:33 PM |
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encognito2014
Dayton, OH
30, joined Feb. 2014
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You need more lighting in your photos.
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| 3/13/2014 3:37:06 PM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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I suck at lighting, but ill keep that in mind thanks
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| 3/13/2014 5:08:59 PM |
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riflessivo
AlmafuerteStaffordshire
United Kingdom
43, joined Jan. 2014
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Daylight is natural light
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| 3/13/2014 5:17:06 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
51, joined Apr. 2013
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I am thinking you need some new pictures.
Have a friend take them.
Outside preferably with natural light.
You look pretty wasted or sleepy in most of the pictures you have posted.
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| 3/13/2014 5:19:55 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
51, joined Apr. 2013
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Hide your friends list too. Ladies don't want to see you harem!
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| 3/13/2014 6:22:18 PM |
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encognito2014
Dayton, OH
30, joined Feb. 2014
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You remind me of a power ranger.
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| 3/16/2014 8:52:03 PM |
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the_mic
Columbus, OH
30, joined Nov. 2013
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I am thinking you need some new pictures.
Have a friend take them.
Outside preferably with natural light.
You look pretty wasted or sleepy in most of the pictures you have posted.
iim a exhausted guy, I work 7 days a week lol but ok
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