pkkn808
Pahoa, HI
33, joined Feb. 2011
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This is a poem I wrote for my ex GF. Tell me what you think. Mahalo
You helped me open my heart and I was able to share things with you that I have never shared with anyone before. You showed me that I could believe in love again. I have learned how to express my feelings not only with actions but also with words. I gave you my trust my heart and you cherished it and kept it close to your heart. Every second I spend with you gave me a new appreciation of life a new view of a bright future to come. This has made it easy for me to wake up every morning knowing another day with you brings warmth to my heart and such happiness that I have never experienced from anything in my life. Your beautiful personality and Seeing you smile has made every second I have spent with you something I will cherish for the rest of my life.
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kailuababe
Kailua, HI
28, joined Jan. 2011
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I love reading poems.....and urs was very gud and touching
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gamerman17
New York, NY
30, joined Apr. 2010
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I love reading poems.....and urs was very gud and touching
cosign. Very heartfelt.....gamer
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pkkn808
Pahoa, HI
33, joined Feb. 2011
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Thank you gamerman17! I love to write poems when I'm feeling love and as well pain. The girl I wrote this for broke my hear and I wrote this one lol
As each day goes by i ask myself who am I? feeling lost, empty and confused wondering why does it feel like Ive been used. In the shadow of darkness Where my broken heart lay waiting for the warmth of love like the brightness of a beautiful day. Feeling anger and hatred as each day goes by. Am I not special or am I just like every other guy? It feels like the devil controls my emotions like a puppet. At the end of each day I wish I didn't feel like this. AH FUK IT!
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gamerman17
New York, NY
30, joined Apr. 2010
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Thank you gamerman17! I love to write poems when I'm feeling love and as well pain. The girl I wrote this for broke my hear and I wrote this one lol
As each day goes by i ask myself who am I? feeling lost, empty and confused wondering why does it feel like Ive been used. In the shadow of darkness Where my broken heart lay waiting for the warmth of love like the brightness of a beautiful day. Feeling anger and hatred as each day goes by. Am I not special or am I just like every other guy? It feels like the devil controls my emotions like a puppet. At the end of each day I wish I didn't feel like this. AH FUK IT!
No problem. I love reading, as well as, writing poems. Your poem was good. You should write more.....gamer
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