10/28/2015 6:39:36 PM |
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5sauce
Pottstown, PA
25, joined Sep. 2015
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Hey everyone I edited my profile please review it again. Thanks so much.
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10/28/2015 6:55:48 PM |
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iamdriftwood
Redding, CA
45, joined Sep. 2012
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It seems a bit copied. I think everyone should be more honest ; not implying you were not. Try more details like stuff you really like. ~P
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10/29/2015 4:27:14 AM |
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joe182121
Bourbonnais, IL
64, joined Aug. 2013
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I see that you did edit it from the previous thread you created. What you have in your bio is an improvement.
You don't need to create a new thread unless it's been months since you had a review, so stay with this one now and others will be along with more suggestions.
Just for starters, you do need more pics and at least one full length pic. The full length pic would be best taken outside with you doing something you enjoy.
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10/29/2015 12:16:53 PM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
81, joined Aug. 2013
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You forgot the pic of you wit ma nutz hangin' ova yo chin, OP!!!
j/s
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10/31/2015 10:36:59 AM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
50, joined Apr. 2013
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Get rid of the looking for a Prince!
Ugh....your going to have to settle for a normal man.
No fairy tales here!
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10/31/2015 7:55:53 PM |
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alls_fair
Thorlákshöfn
Iceland
96, joined May. 2011
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Are there a lot of beaches in Pottstown...or pennsy'vania???
That ol' I love the beach line is generally considered a crock of shit...
Just a casual FYI!
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11/2/2015 2:56:58 AM |
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tickle_bug
Myrtle Beach, SC
23, joined Jul. 2014
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Didn't see version 1, but this one makes you sound like a virgin. A virgin with a 'unicorns and flutterbyes' ideas of love. If that's you, don't change a thing.
Your goals (both animal inspired) made me think you aren't very ambitious. At 24, if you want to be a vet tech, go be one. If money is an issue, get aid or grants. Your goals would seem more realistic if you were already working with critters. As is, the goals sound more like fantasies. Good luck if you do pursue it.
Your interest list is more of the 'unicorn and flutterbye' crap. Honestly, that's an interest list a 16 year old would come up with. Are you really 24? Seriously...The Notebook?
2 super close headshots and a few extra beside the body type question. If you're a bbw, claim it, and own it. You would be surprised at the men looking for that specific trait.
Good luck to you.
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11/2/2015 7:56:26 AM |
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grande_mamon
Houston, TX
49, joined Sep. 2014
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"Hello I'm looking for my prince"
FAIL.
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11/2/2015 9:37:07 AM |
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truckerdaddy915
El Paso, TX
41, joined Feb. 2014
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Are there a lot of beaches in Pottstown...or pennsy'vania???
That ol' I love the beach line is generally considered a crock of shit...
Just a casual FYI!
There are plenty of beaches in PA.....if New Jersey counts.
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11/2/2015 10:48:20 PM |
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pickygirl72
Barrow, AK
45, joined Sep. 2011
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Lose the first sentence.
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11/3/2015 4:28:35 PM |
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doubletrouble77
Crete, IL
38, joined May. 2011
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U need better pics. Need to be more interesting and full length.
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11/3/2015 6:48:17 PM |
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5sauce
Pottstown, PA
25, joined Sep. 2015
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Thanks. Everyone who comment. I'm gonna try once again.
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11/3/2015 6:55:49 PM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
81, joined Aug. 2013
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Need sum lovin' Op?
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11/5/2015 10:24:07 PM |
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tickle_bug
Myrtle Beach, SC
23, joined Jul. 2014
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Thanks. Everyone who comment. I'm gonna try once again.
When you rewrite, post in THIS thread and let everyone know, so they can give some fresh perspective. No need to start a new thread every time you change something.
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