Uriel195
Jamestown, NY
66, joined Oct. 2015
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(this post has been flagged as inappropriate, sorry.)
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
81, joined Aug. 2013
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Do you still do late nite blow n go's?
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ron10000
Green Bay, WI
69, joined Oct. 2008
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I think that a lack of paragraphs and organization are going to hurt you. Read mine, it is longer but has the paragraphs and organization. Also you lack a hook up front (first statement).
Re-write and come back. I think you have good stuff but the presentation needs improvement. Add that hook!!
Good luck
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
61, joined Apr. 2011
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From just reading the post and not the profile.
I think you need more time to get it together before you date again.
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