9/3/2015 1:39:34 AM |
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realnchill4087
San Jose, CA
29, joined Dec. 2014
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But compliments are welcome as well lol. Anyway I'm not attracting the females I would like. And I'd like to know from someone else's point of view what I can improve on. I got thick skin but be constructive not a troll. Lol thanks.
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9/3/2015 4:44:36 AM |
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riflessivo
AlmafuerteStaffordshire
United Kingdom
42, joined Jan. 2014
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Typos, you have plenty of them Jamal.
I can only see your main picture. But to be fair you actually have a fairly decent profile.
I think perhaps you are looking for an intellectual person. In that case I would suggest to upgrade from the casual dressing style.
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9/3/2015 4:50:09 AM |
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joe182121
Bourbonnais, IL
64, joined Aug. 2013
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You probably did not proof read your bio and definitely should.
You need to have a least one close-up pic with a smile, and without a helmet on.
Don't show your income. It's nobody's business at this point.
Not telling if you smoke or not is very important because it is usually a deal breaker.
Make the edits and come back to this thread without starting a new one, for a follow-up...
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9/3/2015 8:41:27 AM |
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ron10000
Green Bay, WI
69, joined Oct. 2008
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I agree with both above. Also bring the age up to 21 and add about 8 more interests.
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9/3/2015 10:24:46 AM |
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24rayan
New York, NY
25, joined Jul. 2015
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OK, I am a newbie here so would appreciate if someone pointed out what I have done wrong (supposedly)?
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9/3/2015 11:54:13 AM |
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ron10000
Green Bay, WI
69, joined Oct. 2008
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OK, I am a newbie here so would appreciate if someone pointed out what I have done wrong (supposedly)?
You need to start your own request. Go back one page then click "Topic" to get started.
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9/3/2015 8:51:15 PM |
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surraugeny
North Richland Hills, TX
37, joined Mar. 2011
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"excwpt " What does that mean? You need to proofread your profile. Change the syntax around a bit and spellcheck. I'm glad you didn't just put you're laid back and no drama. But I would suggest a better picture of your face.... that would work.
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9/3/2015 9:01:12 PM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
81, joined Aug. 2013
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I need a better pic of your tits!! ^^^6
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9/8/2015 10:36:17 PM |
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nuerofire78
Sunnyvale, TX
37, joined Aug. 2013
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But compliments are welcome as well lol. Anyway I'm not attracting the females I would like. And I'd like to know from someone else's point of view what I can improve on. I got thick skin but be constructive not a troll. Lol thanks.
Disagree with the headline topic.
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9/8/2015 11:29:31 PM |
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angelsinstl
Collinsville, IL
46, joined Mar. 2013
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Only one of your photos is working (all the rest are missing links). And the one that is working (your main) is too far away... you should have it be a close up of your face so women can see what you look like. Remember with online dating you have about 2 seconds to get someone's attention with YOUR PHOTO ALONE... that is what will draw them in to read more on your profile.
Also, like others have said... spell check is your friend (auto correct, not so much! LOL).
Other than that, you have a decent discription of yourself... but the main thing (imo anyway) would be more and better photos!
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10/1/2015 5:18:37 PM |
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greeleybro
Longmont, CO
49, joined Oct. 2013
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Main photo u in a bicycle helmet???
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10/1/2015 10:13:28 PM |
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nothingneeded
Johnston, IA
47, joined Sep. 2014
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Im sorry.
But i cant...that helmet tells me much more than for bike riding.
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10/13/2015 5:12:52 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
61, joined Apr. 2011
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I think I know what you are thinking...lol
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