| 3/16/2016 4:02:36 PM |
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paulluvscuddlin
Ottumwa, IA
33, joined Sep. 2013
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Firstly, all my photos are old. It's a problem that will be rectified as soon as possible.
Secondly, my daughter is the most important person in my life. She comes first in everything I do and my profile is no different. I wouldn't want to be with someone that couldn't handle the fact that I have a child, so it's the first thing I say.
Aside from that, I'm looking for legit reviews on my essay. If you have something constructive to say, or a serious question to ask, I will happily respond.
If your post looks even remotely like harassment, I will block you from posting. It's not that I have a problem going toe to toe with you, it's that the forum rules tell me to. To be quite honest I love making rude people look mentally deficient in front of their peers. It's the only sure way to deal with a bully.
SO! I'm taking comments and constructive criticism now.
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| 3/17/2016 1:20:25 AM |
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god_says
Cabo San Lucas
Mexico
48, joined Aug. 2014
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Talking shit to, or about anyone
AFTER you block them, only makes you look like a p*ssy.
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| 3/17/2016 1:55:28 AM |
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paulluvscuddlin
Ottumwa, IA
33, joined Sep. 2013
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Well then I guess it's a good thing I wasn't planning on it. As I said, very specifically, I intend to block people who harass me, rather than browbeat them, because that's what the forum rules tell me to do.
Additionally, if you actually read my post, it's clear that my opinion is that the only way to deal with a bully is to make them feel completely inferior, which doesn't happen if they can't see you making them look foolish.
Winning at context.
[Edited 3/17/2016 1:58:08 AM ]
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| 3/17/2016 7:41:55 AM |
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ron10000
Green Bay, WI
69, joined Oct. 2008
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Yes, new photos. Include a head shot with a bright smile and no shirtless ones unless appropriate to the activity. Answer the smoking question. Most of your statements start with "I". Try to reword those, it just comes off better.
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| 3/17/2016 8:43:28 AM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
81, joined Aug. 2013
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Are you lying there waiting for another hot load in your face?
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| 3/17/2016 11:43:32 AM |
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paulluvscuddlin
Ottumwa, IA
33, joined Sep. 2013
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Yes, new photos. Include a head shot with a bright smile and no shirtless ones unless appropriate to the activity. Answer the smoking question. Most of your statements start with "I". Try to reword those, it just comes off better.
Thank you. I'll try to reword my essay a bit.
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| 3/17/2016 11:59:42 AM |
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l380
Alabaster, AL
44, joined Sep. 2014
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Op is a mental case.
Just read his pro and his posts in this thread along with some if those pics.
You come off as a fussy, high maintenance sissy.
Go ahead and block me so I don't have to see that stupid pro pic with that f*ggot screen name anymore.
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| 3/17/2016 8:51:00 PM |
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bandit__geezer
FujianFujian
China
57, joined Oct. 2015
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The screen name is a bit desperate sounding. Other than that, I'd lose a few of the cliches and add something about the type of woman you seek.
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| 4/8/2016 12:28:44 AM |
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pickygirl72
Barrow, AK
45, joined Sep. 2011
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it's that the forum rules tell me to. To be quite honest I love making rude people look mentally deficient in front of their peers. It's the only sure way to deal with a bully.
Buddy you will get your a** handed to you on a cracker. This place will tear you apart. Rules, what rules, there are no more rules. 
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| 4/8/2016 7:44:59 PM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
54, joined Aug. 2010
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I didn't block her for the things she said and I did make use of the advise she gave. I blocked her for the way she said them. She could have been far more tactful about the way she said them. It was rude and uncalled for, and even if it doesn't remove her post to block her, I'm perfectly happy to wait for the advise of somebody who isn't going to be intentionally inflammatory in her wording.
I love that the forum history is attached to the users here. Please see his previous forum request for a profile review to get an idea of the delicate ego involved here.
Go ahead and block me honey, the only one who won't see this is YOU.
For what it's worth, you have obviously changed your focus from f**kbuddy to attempt-at-boyfriend-material. The shirtless photos still come across as uber-douchey so it's a good thing you are getting new pictures done.
Someone who isn't into kids will see your stats say you have kids and won't read further, so no need to get your knickers twisted about it. Although you have said in your profile you don't have primary custody, so it shouldn't be an issue anyway.
Your written profile is actually decent. Your photos are trashy and your attitude is embarassing, so if there were only some way for you to fake being as legit as your profile makes you sound you'd do fine.
I really don't see why you are asking for profile suggestions, you seem to have it all worked out. You know you need to get better/current photos and you have hit on all the key points to sound sincere. I just hope the women you contact are smart enough to review your forum/post history to see what you're really like.
Good luck.
ps - no need to respond, I have no interest in being your penpal.
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| 4/8/2016 8:32:03 PM |
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bandit__geezer
FujianFujian
China
57, joined Oct. 2015
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| 4/8/2016 8:37:12 PM |
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dasnixter
Jessieville, AR
58, joined Jul. 2010
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Yo esse
como esta?
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| 4/21/2016 8:44:11 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
61, joined Apr. 2011
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Just be truthful and admit....that your Bruce Jenner's new flame.
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| 4/24/2016 3:27:56 AM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
50, joined Apr. 2013
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2 1/2 years since your first profile review and you have a one year old daughter! I'm thinking you should go back to the first profile you wrote as that was obviously helpful in getting you not only a hook up but a legacy! Maybe it will work again.
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| 4/24/2016 6:46:35 AM |
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Mercedes_02
AñatuyaAñatuya
Australia
101, joined Dec. 2014
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bumblebee7: Just be truthful and admit....that your Bruce Jenner's new flame.
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| 5/21/2016 9:53:59 AM |
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sadlsticsienna
AñatuyaNew South Wales
Australia
23, joined Jan. 2016
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Dreamy and good profile. I like how you mention and discuss some of the stuff you like
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