| 8/9/2015 10:12:31 AM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
65, joined May. 2012
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if anyone would like to critique my profile would appreciate comments
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| 8/9/2015 10:18:47 AM |
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dasnixter
Jessieville, AR
58, joined Jul. 2010
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Sure.
Dump the Remington 870
for an O/U. 
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| 8/9/2015 12:14:48 PM |
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forums_only
Maple Ridge, BC
54, joined Aug. 2010
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You sound like a blast.
Unfortunately you may be wasting time on this site (with the word 'hookup' in the name, you will see a lot of guys looking for a drive-through relationship).
Have you also checked out Plenty of Fish? They have a better douchebag-to-normal ratio there.
Good luck!
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| 8/9/2015 1:34:56 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
65, joined May. 2012
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Funny .. Perhaps more spread out
Evidently datehookup is pretty much that .....
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| 8/9/2015 1:55:47 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
65, joined May. 2012
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Really ?
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| 8/9/2015 2:05:27 PM |
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ron10000
Green Bay, WI
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When I first looked, I thought “darn, too bad she is so far away”. Then I noticed that you are looking down by 8 years but only up by 2. That discrepancy would turn me off even is I were in that age range and near you.
I would suggest a balanced age range and add interests to that box. They are searchable.
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| 8/9/2015 10:30:09 PM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
81, joined Aug. 2013
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Do you still swallow, OP?
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| 8/9/2015 10:54:57 PM |
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joe182121
Bourbonnais, IL
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I would suggest, as Ron already has, that if you balance the age range, you'll increase your chances. Keep in mind that if you really don't want to date someone more than 2 years older, you don't have to answer messages from those that are older, however it makes you appear more realistic.
I see the way you included your interests, however as was mentioned since the interests are searchable, that will go a long way to attracting the kind of man you are searching for. Use one or two words separated by a comma.
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| 8/9/2015 11:08:33 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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Thank you !!!
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| 8/9/2015 11:23:18 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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You could winter in Houston 
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| 8/10/2015 12:18:37 AM |
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hatebeingignore
Bronx, NY
29, joined May. 2014
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Nice profile
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| 8/10/2015 9:19:18 AM |
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ron10000
Green Bay, WI
69, joined Oct. 2008
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You could winter in Houston
Yeah, but I am too old you know!! 
I spend February in El Paso with my brother. It is a nice break from Wisconsin Winters.
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| 8/10/2015 11:25:22 AM |
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dixie_dancer
Kansas City, KS
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I would like to see you expand on these two paragraphs
I'm a Minnesota native... I'm affectionate, fun-loving, honest, outgoing, enjoy people, social, positive, a good communicator.. I dislike drama and negativity. Oh yes, self confident
I enjoy Photography, dog rescue work, eating healthy, the water, dancing, fishing, cooking,
live music, entertaining, travel, family, and friends...
By writing a little story about yourself it will be a little more insightful and less like Clif notes
Minnesota native - did you move for warmer weather? A job? Your kids? You love to tracker, do you only travel between native Minnesota and Texas, or do you take off on coastal shoreline monthlong trips? Do you indulge in cruises? Have a bucket list to see castles in Ireland?
I'm on the fence with people describing their own traits. To a reclusive nun you might be outgoing but to a thrill seeking sky diving cross continent hitch hiking adventurer, you might be a dud.
Why don't you tell us HOW you are outgoing? These descriptors are so variable, unless you tell us HOW they apply to you it's very likely they could be misinterpreted depending on your viewer.
You like photography? Do you do scenes and sunsets or do you love photographing small children? Do you compete in any photography contests? Do you shoot with 35mm film or are you new age digital? Do you still run your own dark room?
Dog rescue work? Do you volunteer in no kill shelters? Are you the co-chair of a fundraising group who raises funds?
Do you fly fish? Creek fish? Deep ocean huge story tall fish, fish? Do you fish every weekend or fish once a year?
See how little details like this will show a lot about you to your reader?
Honestly you leave so much gray area that I would fear might scare people away because there's so many questions without any idea where to start.
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| 8/10/2015 2:35:43 PM |
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picassotrigger
Pittsburgh, PA
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Consider hiding your "featured friends". When I see this I wonder "is she dating any of them? If not, why not?" All it does is raise questions and divert attention away from what should be my central concern: "Would it be fun for me to date you?"
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| 8/10/2015 5:18:52 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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Thank you everybody this is great!!!
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| 8/10/2015 7:16:11 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
50, joined Apr. 2013
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Any time I see a woman make a post using the words 'we females' I immediately think the profile is a fake and it is actually a male scammer looking to get an easy target....a lonely man! Lonely men will dish out cash for a meet and greet long before a lonely woman will...especially if there is sex talk!
I am wondering if this is true because you have used those words in your posts!
If you want to pretend to be a woman then you should get our lingo down!
Good luck.
Edit...I should be blocked shortly!
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| 8/11/2015 9:06:16 AM |
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dixie_dancer
Kansas City, KS
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I see you've tweaked the first few paragraphs a bit. But now you need to work on sentence structure and flow. You leapfrog from one topic to a totally unrelated one in the same sentence even! Sooo hard to follow.
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| 8/11/2015 11:11:50 AM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
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Thank you everybody, deepthroating this thick c*ck is great!!!
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| 8/14/2015 11:58:47 AM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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Thank you profiles takes a lot of though and conveying them to other people not always so easy...
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| 8/15/2015 3:00:51 PM |
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mx___mx
Mount Victoria, MD
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So you love Photography ? Why do all your photos suck ?
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| 8/16/2015 2:01:00 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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What does that have to do with taking good pictures of yourself ... Or having other people take them for you..
That dumb a** comment ...
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| 8/16/2015 9:07:03 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
50, joined Apr. 2013
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So you love Photography ? Why do all your photos suck ?
This is actually a good comment.
People who love photography don't take pictures of pictures on their phone and post them without editing out the black border and phone status! People who are stealing other people's pictures with limited intelligence who know nothing about photography...well they do that! Has to do with picture sizing and downloading to site after the stealing of someone's photos on line.
Now..,carry on!
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| 8/17/2015 9:37:10 AM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
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You'd be better off stickin' to what you're good at, OP, like takin' multiple hot loads down your throat!!
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| 8/17/2015 1:52:26 PM |
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dixie_dancer
Kansas City, KS
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So you love Photography ? Why do all your photos suck ?
I do agree this is a valid comment.
Someone who loves photography would have an eye for a photo with good composition. Good lighting. The rule of thirds.
Even when I take selfies, I utilize basic photography skills to create visually stimulating pictures.
Plenty of camera apps out there have timers. Almost all my photos were taken that way. And then cropped to eliminate clutter or wasted space.
For someone who claims to love photography, you are either too lazy to take care in presenting photos of yourself to the world, or you don't really know what you're doing with photography.
You also have yet to rewrite your bio in any sort of flow. Your sentence structures are still nonexistent.
Let us know when you've redid it
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| 8/18/2015 1:16:51 AM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
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She may need to take and English class first!
Then work on sentence structure when he has the language down.
Could be a couple years before that happens!
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| 8/18/2015 5:17:41 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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Man you guys brutal ... I feel like I'm writing something for my English class... This is not a high class dating sight. Free at that...
It's not a photo contest or a English class.
I prefer to not beat other women down either...
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| 8/18/2015 6:38:14 PM |
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lucasaurus
Benson, AZ
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| 8/18/2015 6:39:19 PM |
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doubletrouble77
Crete, IL
38, joined May. 2011
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Actually they haven't been brutal but honest and gave very good advice. Also may want to try okcupid for a better chances.
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| 8/18/2015 9:30:59 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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Ok I won't take it personnel ..
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| 8/18/2015 9:39:32 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
50, joined Apr. 2013
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Personal.
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| 8/19/2015 10:54:09 AM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
65, joined May. 2012
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lol ... Thank you
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| 8/19/2015 11:06:32 AM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
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Ok I won't take all the personnel on the first floor in a gangbang if you all promise to elect me cumslut of DH! ..
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| 8/19/2015 12:02:26 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
65, joined May. 2012
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Your a mess ... I bet the ladies just love you !! Ugh
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| 8/20/2015 6:34:27 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
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It looks like a carbon copy of someone listing almost the same thing most women list .
the kicker is, its all the stuff that someone seeking a real ltr or marriage writes.
but then I took out this exert: I prefer casual if I can get by with it.
Jeez, if that's all your looking for, then why write all that stuff that looks like your seeking a life partner???
Or, is the casual just a way to get a life partner? I'd wonder myself.
but, if your just seeking that....then gear the profile for that and most of what you listed won't matter in a casual relation....which usually is a FWB.
Put down, your not interest in rushing men who just want to bang and go.
Then put some things, without revealing too much, that will attract a man seeking casual too.
The daughter type pics don't matter in this type of relation....show the goods, but respectably.
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| 8/20/2015 12:35:21 PM |
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dixie_dancer
Kansas City, KS
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Why wouldn't you want to out your BEST foot forward when 'introducing' yourself for the first time to potential suitors?
Would you show up to a first date in clothes with paint and bleach stains? Unwashed and uncombed hair?
No.
The. Why would you put up lackluster photos, write in incomplete sentences, in a jumbled mess of half stats about yourself?
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| 8/20/2015 3:42:19 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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Really I'm not a writer... I love all the feedback I only wish I could put it altogether better .... I look at people's
Info some it's on long sentence ...
They are all so different...
I understand the sentence structure etc ..
Pics not so easy ... I've taken pics of flowers .. Sunsets, beautiful travel dedtinations...
etc not of myself .
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| 8/20/2015 4:35:51 PM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
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How are you going to add captions to your pics if you can't spell or put a sentence together?
...and yes, the women love me, at least in my world!
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| 8/20/2015 5:29:14 PM |
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mx___mx
Mount Victoria, MD
82, joined May. 2015
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Jack you to should get together  Then she stop looking for a partner
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| 8/20/2015 6:03:33 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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I thought this was informal ... I did graduate ..
I have it together I have a house that's paid for.... no debt ... Raised 3
Functioning contributing to society boys... Dam
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| 8/20/2015 6:43:33 PM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
50, joined Apr. 2013
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Why wouldn't you want to out your BEST foot forward when 'introducing' yourself for the first time to potential suitors?
Would you show up to a first date in clothes with paint and bleach stains? Unwashed and uncombed hair?
No.
The. Why would you put up lackluster photos, write in incomplete sentences, in a jumbled mess of half stats about yourself?
It is either a fake or the medicine!
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| 8/20/2015 7:03:40 PM |
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mx___mx
Mount Victoria, MD
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I like turtles
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| 8/20/2015 7:29:18 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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I guess because I've been married all of my adult life and I had no clue that dating websight were so detailed .. im not a great writer... I don't know what pics are the best and who to have take them.
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| 8/21/2015 6:58:05 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
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Let me write your profile based on what you listed.
but a "reality " version.
Hi guys, I'm really just preferring a casual relation.
I've got kids still living at home....yes, I understand at my age....surely you'd think they could stand on their own two feet by now.
But hey, I've got to spend my time and money on something right???....sure they will take away the time we could have together and break up a good thing.
But, you know how it is...kids come first.
and to make matters even worse, I keep several cats and dogs to the tune of well over 10.
and I decided no man was worth keeping my long hair for.
and when it comes to sex, I believe in the old Ozzie and Harriot sex life style.
Aren't I a real catch?
you see op, this is what your profile ads up to.....when any guy who has been the dating mill reads it.
my suggestion?
Delete and go hang in a bar for some sex.
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| 8/21/2015 7:00:02 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
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Huuuuuuuuggggggggeeeeee red flags.
60 something and kids still mooching off you?
All those pets.
Maybe some rookie to dating sites or someone desperate for sex might inquire.
I wouldn't.
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| 8/21/2015 7:08:42 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
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I had you mixed up with someone else op.
...sorry.
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| 8/21/2015 7:09:51 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
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Wow....I'm embarrassed.
Your profile looks good to me.
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| 8/21/2015 5:50:15 PM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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Thank you . I've been made to feel that's it's awful !!!
I'm on another dating websight I have a lot of guy friends I don't have issues meeting guys I'm selective
And haven't meet HIM yet . lol
Today though I believe I'm getting closer .. I need to pick one or the other... Pat
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| 8/21/2015 6:00:36 PM |
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urealysucklol
San Benito, TX
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| 8/22/2015 6:48:12 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
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I don't know why I confused you with that other woman.
Maybe....I was up too early and didn't have my coffee yet.
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| 8/22/2015 11:22:02 AM |
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pattytaxi
Houston, TX
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Sounds reasonable ...
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| 8/23/2015 8:54:55 PM |
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dixie_dancer
Kansas City, KS
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I know I'm not human without my coffee
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| 8/23/2015 8:57:16 PM |
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rightguyforu92
Lisle, IL
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I know I'm not human without my coffee
Dixie ur a drug addict...Ur addiction is to a legal drug called caffeine.. dont worry ur not alone....ur addiction is shared by millions of other Americans
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| 8/23/2015 9:52:35 PM |
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mx___mx
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| 8/31/2015 9:49:40 AM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
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Dixie I'm a drug addict...I'm addicted to a legal drug called semen.. dont worry I'm not alone....my addiction is shared by millions of other c*cksuckers
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