12/17/2012 4:20:22 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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People i love haiku and so do many of you but after the first 5 threads i'm asked to do another but i don't appreciate a turtle like response when posting except for the few that have valid reasons when they have not posted in a while while i don't like having to bump my own thread or maybe i have to hear about that should i ...everyone can see my examples below in bold type i post once i begin every new haiku thread, plus we all did haiku in HS which IMO offers us all a chance to post a haiku which unwinds the mind before you post to your other favorite threads or after you post in the other threads ...sometimes i'm not here for many reasons and it's sad i find this thread on page 4 or some email and can't find it at all. That's ain't right even though posters come and go on here as they please...i can't control that
but please if you post here, today or any day keep this paragraph in your mind...
Folks this is the 6th edition of Haiku and renamed the People's Haiku for the right reason ..try if you're new and stay reading all haiku's...that makes me most happy
The People’s Haiku (Hi-koo) thread, thank you loyal posters, it’s your interest and contributions that make this thread possible!!! It’s back again because you wanted it to stay.
Please be welcomed everyone, esp if you’re new on this site and keep to haikuing by writing a haiku of your own/ invite a friend to join us also and/ or make friends right here— if you forget how to haiku, please read this whole thread and make your own to share here with the others here --it's always a great day to show yours on this thread. Perhaps start here on this thread when you enter the 50’s group any day to unwind some and then visit the other threads and/ or come here after you visit the other threads
Thanks for posting again and again.
>>> Have to say the correct pronunciation after looking haiku up is (Hi-Koo) Sorry, I stand corrected!!!
Haiku is a poetic form and a type of poetry from the Japanese culture.
Haiku combines form, content, and language in a meaningful, yet compact form. Haiku poets, whom you will soon be, write about everyday things.
Many themes include nature, feelings, or experiences. Usually they use simple words and grammar.
Haiku is three short lines! The first line contains five (5) syllables, the second line seven (7) syllables, and the third line contains five (5) syllables.
Haiku doesn't rhyme. A Haiku must "paint" a mental image in the reader's mind. This is the challenge of Haiku - to put the poem's meaning and imagery in the reader's mind in ONLY 17 syllables over just three (3) lines of poetry!
NOTE: You may take the last line of a previous Haiku and use it for your 1st line if you wish or start your own 3 lined haiku.
Check out two Haiku examples below
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The red blossom bends
and drips its dew to the ground.
Like a tear it falls
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Curving up, then down.
Meeting blue sky and green earth
Melding sun and rain.
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12/17/2012 4:22:53 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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another fun thread
haiku if you're new or old
people's haiku thread
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12/17/2012 4:24:39 PM |
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findingalicia
Lexington, KY
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Happy Haikuing.
Silence falls lightly tonight
Upon a quiet day.
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12/17/2012 4:28:50 PM |
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lifesahoot2
North Myrtle Beach, SC
65, joined Sep. 2012
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No turtle responses...move it...move it... Sorry, just being silly...
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12/17/2012 5:03:02 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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turtle like response?
I work all day as do most
will post when I can
WOW sorp..
but thanks for starting a new one.
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12/17/2012 5:44:35 PM |
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pinetree10
Cumberland, MD
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New haiku, thank you.
Mind/spirit sharper, words shared.
Reach out, make a friend...
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12/17/2012 6:30:56 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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Promises await
those who dare to make a date
with no floundering
no pun intended
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12/17/2012 6:40:41 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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you might land big one
or even a minnow too
fishing can be fun!
heather!
just me, being ME!
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12/17/2012 7:11:12 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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never enjoyed it
BUT! was I talking the sport
or talking of me?
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12/17/2012 7:18:14 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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bet not even you
for I am me, you are not
and right, I dont know
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12/17/2012 7:41:52 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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this is confusing
if its left it aint right though
right never gets left
huh?
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12/17/2012 9:23:46 PM |
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sunshineluckyou
Mount Ephraim, NJ
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THERE IS CONFUSION
LIKE WHEN YOU SAY,TURN LEFT/RIGHT?
YOU KNOW WHAT MEANT,RIGHT?
HEY THERE SORP---GOOD TO SEE HAIKU 6WILL BEING DO MY BEST TO COME HERE
AS OFTEN AS I CANSALUTE
HELLO TO ALL OUR HAIKU FRIENDS HERE
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12/18/2012 2:49:46 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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turtles are like slow
i'm more jet like but getting old
haiku for us all
what i mean by turtle-like i explained in my OP ...this thread i hope can be found for all before it gets off the main pages as when we age most forget we posted on certain threads so when it can't be found, no one posts on it or remembers to ...90 % of the time i post on other threads first because my thread can't be found or i have to bump my thread with at least one post when i get online if you catch my drift...another thing i like lurkers because sorp is still a household name on DH and thank you all for that ...
to all that have posted since yesterday thank you all
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12/18/2012 8:57:44 PM |
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findingalicia
Lexington, KY
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Stop the wrath of Sorp
Post Haiku before midnight
Or.. Off with your head!
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12/18/2012 9:37:30 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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Or.. Off with your head!
Cant sleep so Im out of bed
posting here, not mine
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12/19/2012 12:11:13 PM |
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sunshineluckyou
Mount Ephraim, NJ
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POSTING HERE,NOT MINE
THIS IS MINE,GOOD DAY TO ALL
HAVE FUN WITH HAIKU
A GOOD DAY TO YOU SORP
HELLO TO ALL OUR HAIKU FRIENDS
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12/19/2012 1:31:34 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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haiku like habit
you post one from memory
all smile the whole day
hello haikuers ..heather, fishing, alicia and sunshine
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12/19/2012 8:17:00 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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Rest now...week soon ends
Christmas is soon upon us
Merry Christmas all
sorp, heather and all
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12/19/2012 8:29:16 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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Peace to all our friends
good will to men and women
It starts with us all.
Merry Christmas to you too heather!!!
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12/19/2012 9:21:28 PM |
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findingalicia
Lexington, KY
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Cold is the long night
Fire of life in the ashes
Fallen from our love.
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12/19/2012 10:29:51 PM |
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meadowlady
Verona, WI
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I was devastated to see the end of haiku.
But then I found you
It’s a familiar face
One I like to see.
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12/20/2012 2:37:56 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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blanket of beauty
supersoft fleece around us
warmth so heavenly
hello medow and grace i knew you both could find the thread...hello, alicia, fishing and heather...countdown to Christmas is 4 days away...
and to anyone planning to be away--most happy of holidays...
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12/20/2012 6:34:53 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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Missing your presence
but now that youre found and safe
heart is filled with joy
evening all
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12/20/2012 6:37:31 PM |
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pinetree10
Cumberland, MD
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Missing your presents
And missing you. Fantasies
this year'll have to do...
Good holidays to all
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12/21/2012 12:50:11 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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Christmas Day haiku
celebrate and give most friends
world needs unity
hello and TGIF heather, fishing, pine, grace, alicia and meadow plus to all not here
Merry Christmas to all the haikuers and to the people that lurk too
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12/21/2012 3:12:03 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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stars of yesteryear
abbott and costello smile
seeing this remake
saw this on Jimmy Fallon last nite with jerry seinfeld and billy crystal participating...enjoy ...i loved abbott and costello if you didn't noticed
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12/22/2012 8:57:49 AM |
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pinetree10
Cumberland, MD
70, joined Nov. 2008
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Day for memories,
yes, and hopes of things to come.
Your smile lights my way...
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12/22/2012 9:03:56 AM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
63, joined Aug. 2008
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(this post has been flagged as inappropriate, sorry.)
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12/22/2012 12:34:05 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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season's best wishes
from haiku posters to you
enjoy a safe week
to my haikuers a blessed holiday and to everyone else one too...maybe i'll be online tomorrow for a short while or Monday morning/ if not see you all on WED...hope you are here for me Haiku friends...
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12/23/2012 12:24:37 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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snow flakes on Christmas
guess everyone is away
let it snow, let it
well i guess everyone is on Christmas vacation already and not a creature was heard not even a lurker...
well folks have a good holiday season and leave sorp a haiku
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12/23/2012 12:47:43 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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mice rule Christmas fun
not a creature was heard from
not even the sorp
yes happy holidays heather
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12/23/2012 9:09:39 PM |
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findingalicia
Lexington, KY
66, joined May. 2011
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Merry Christmas Sorp
I hope your day be Blessed
Wonderful... Joyous.
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12/23/2012 9:20:18 PM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
62, joined Apr. 2008
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Wonderful...joyous!
Wishing you holiday cheer
I talked to Santa
(He said you've been a very good boy)
[Edited 12/23/2012 9:23:26 PM ]
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12/24/2012 8:09:45 AM |
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sweetsugar57
Pottsville, PA
66, joined Oct. 2009
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Why we celebrate?
Individual reasons!!
God bless you and Peace.
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12/24/2012 5:15:38 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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tonite santa comes
loves you like he does us all
smiles for all of us
hello all you great women of haiku...1st time on kindle fire hd learning how to
to use it
,
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12/24/2012 6:17:47 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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Santa is coming
the children will be sleeping
boisterous in morn
I get to go to oldest house first thing in AM watch boys wake to open gifts.. total chaos!
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12/24/2012 6:28:31 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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bring smile to my face
Santa already did that
got my gift early
and a Merry Christmas to you heather
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12/25/2012 8:58:47 AM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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make great memories
please the type you don`t forget
did I just say that
high fishing and Heather . the best to you both and to the rest the same
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12/25/2012 10:58:16 AM |
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hugandakiss_xo
Merritt, NC
63, joined Jul. 2011
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Im gonna say this
Merry Christmas to you all
I love You... THATS ALL
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12/25/2012 11:06:09 AM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
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Christmas greetings all !
Bless those not with family
Bring them home soon PLEASE!
While most of us are thankful for our families and friends close by.. please dont forget ALL of our soldiers and their families.. God Bless them all for a quick and safe return home.
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12/25/2012 1:59:26 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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Christmas greetings all !
Bless those not with family
Bring them home soon PLEASE!
While most of us are thankful for our families and friends close by.. please dont forget ALL of our soldiers and their families.. God Bless them all for a quick and safe return home.
soldiers are Christmas
their families and we love
their bravery
good thought fishing
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12/25/2012 2:29:21 PM |
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findingalicia
Lexington, KY
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Those so far away
In Body or in Spirit
Send Christmas Prayers.
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12/25/2012 2:44:50 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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Those so far away
In Body or in Spirit
Send Christmas Prayers.
Christmas cheer copa
may your dad smile bright for us
a Memorex smile
hello alicia
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12/26/2012 9:06:41 AM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
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well no harm, no foul
Knicks lose to those Lakers guys
road trips are too long
happy Wed folks
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12/26/2012 1:41:15 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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I'm not complaining
but those road games from west coast
ruin beauty sleep
hey heather are you off this week...
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12/26/2012 3:24:11 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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coulda, shoulda, would
but coulda, shoulda, woulda
been someone trending
[Edited 12/26/2012 3:26:42 PM ]
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12/26/2012 5:03:36 PM |
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copa157
Port Orange, FL
64, joined Jul. 2010
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Sent home this morning?
I wish...spent day in ER
Dads doing better
hey all....in NJ dad went to ER @ 4:30am....had fluid in lungs....that's better now, but may not be strong enough for needed surgery....keep those prayers coming
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12/26/2012 5:19:42 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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Sent home this morning?
I wish...spent day in ER
Dads doing better
hey all....in NJ dad went to ER @ 4:30am....had fluid in lungs....that's better now, but may not be strong enough for needed surgery....keep those prayers coming
copa...here for you friend
hope his strength finds him timely
your dad in my thoughts
hello grace and copa...
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12/26/2012 7:30:15 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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the lady wears red
her smile enters any room
should I complain folks
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12/26/2012 8:08:27 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
63, joined Aug. 2008
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I wear no dresses
I am naked before you
I'm dreaming again
hey Copa, sorry to hear of your dad.. prayers that he gets his strength back so they can do whats necessary .
sorp
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12/26/2012 8:30:47 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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dreaming and smiling
sleeping like a big old kid
yet alone right now...
hi fishing...
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12/26/2012 8:37:05 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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tick tack goes the clock
we have fun twenty four seven
love finds all timely
hi Grace and hello night crew somewhere I have not been at this time is here
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12/26/2012 9:14:38 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
63, joined Aug. 2008
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love finds all timely
past loves may now have regrets
shrug it off, move on
evening again sorp and all
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12/27/2012 9:36:40 AM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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giant wish prevails
secret Santa delivers
love captures us all
hello fishing and crew
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12/27/2012 10:45:34 AM |
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findingalicia
Lexington, KY
66, joined May. 2011
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Celebrate New Years
Hug your honey.. kiss her soft
Or Him..Your pleasure.
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12/27/2012 12:42:15 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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treat life lovingly
all for one and one for all
loves bites us timely
hello alicia and grace
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12/27/2012 1:51:37 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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loves bites untimely
hits your face, like pizza pie
that's amore folks
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12/27/2012 1:56:48 PM |
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fishingmom
Lake Alfred, FL
63, joined Aug. 2008
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no expectations
just going with the flow now
dance on New Years Eve
I will be going out on New Years eve... not looking for love, just a good time, but.. one never knows... do we?
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12/27/2012 1:59:44 PM |
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sorpstar
Little River, SC
65, joined Oct. 2009
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love is splendid thing
enjoy dates, excitement happens
when you least expect
hello fishing enjoy your New Yrs eve, maybe 2013 may be special for some of us...
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12/27/2012 2:38:39 PM |
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copa157
Port Orange, FL
64, joined Jul. 2010
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Waiting for results
Time moves much too slow sometimes
Is there a bar here?
Waiting, waiting, waiting......
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