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lorlieanne
Sweet Home, OR
60, joined Apr. 2013
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Can't sleep in the heat
even with loss of light,
The sun created a warm
sweaty night.
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7/18/2013 9:03:40 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Sunset comes to soon
Dark sky and stars lure eyes
Tomorrow is dawning
Is this the correct form? Would like to learn this Haiku thing
Don't worry about spelling or right word to use but I try to think in phrases of word usage. So think 5 syllables or words totalling 5 syllables, 7 syllables or words totally 7 syllables and end the third line like first so it equals 17 words or syllables...a word like 'didn't' counts as one syllable or word in haiku...best thing read the OP on page one...
Sunset comes too soon..5
Dark sky and stars lure bright eyes7
Tomorrow's sawing 5
So you done good freebird...thanks
Love is earned today
Yet Tomorrow It repeats
Bring on the challenge
Thank you too lorli
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7/18/2013 5:54:15 PM |
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dannoboy
Eldon, MO
64, joined Feb. 2009
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Heat may do me in
Brush and trees will have to wait
Plan for cooler days
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7/19/2013 11:01:32 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Hot continues here
Six days ninety or more, help
Needing a rain dance
TGIF...folks
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7/19/2013 11:02:42 AM |
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just_zoe1958
Burlington, VT
58, joined Dec. 2011
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Child's summer delight
joyful screams, playful laughter
bare feet hit water.
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7/19/2013 4:22:05 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Nite to skinny dip
Need a partner to indulge
Remember such nights
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7/19/2013 4:33:04 PM |
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just_zoe1958
Burlington, VT
58, joined Dec. 2011
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Skinny dip, not me
Playing in brooks or small streams
Gives me happy dreams
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7/19/2013 4:41:37 PM |
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just_zoe1958
Burlington, VT
58, joined Dec. 2011
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Naked PITA gal
painted clothes, holding a sign
Hope it doesn't rain.
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7/19/2013 5:56:13 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Dancing in the rain
Spish, splash, step by step, I move
Call me Gene Kelly
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7/20/2013 8:24:21 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Today comes again
Will there be a peaceful march
Be careful people
May be tension where I live which is metro NYC...just over the Hudson river on north Jersey side...traffic will be at a standstill plus add the heat...best place may be in a AC in bedroom..
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7/21/2013 11:32:50 PM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
62, joined Apr. 2008
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It's funny how fast
your life can change in a blink
never to be the same.
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7/22/2013 12:03:05 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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losing interest
Staying here, becoming bored
Old times need comeback
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7/22/2013 12:33:56 AM |
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dannoboy
Eldon, MO
64, joined Feb. 2009
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First they're here,,,then, not
All at once or none at all
On and off like switch
Comes and goes like rain
perenial as the grass
so we bump our threads
& good Monday morning to ya.
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7/22/2013 9:33:34 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Week starts off for us
High temps maybe take time off
Add little sunshine
Good week to all..
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7/22/2013 10:28:29 AM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
62, joined Apr. 2008
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I love to be here
Putting my thoughts in writing
All of a sudden...
Poof! I find myself
With little time for myself
Rarely a minute.
I miss being on here
So when I get a small chance
I try to catch up.
But they need me here
And I really do believe
Soon there will be time.
I hope so anyway
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7/22/2013 11:15:54 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Dutchess in labor
I'm thinking it'll be a boy
Or sweet baby girl
Any guesses she went into labor late last nite ..
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7/22/2013 11:17:21 AM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
62, joined Apr. 2008
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I'm guessing a girl.
She sure would be pretty one
with those as parents!
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7/22/2013 11:22:29 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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My late dad once said
If mom retains looks, It's boy
Girl if looks from mom
my late dads theory...lol...heard he got my birth right...
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7/22/2013 11:34:02 AM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
62, joined Apr. 2008
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That's interesting
Guess we'll have to wait and see
If your dad was right.
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7/22/2013 3:35:05 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Royal baby boy
Third in line for royal throne
Congrats to couple
Anna want to go into prediction business...lol...
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7/22/2013 3:49:29 PM |
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kitty97
West Palm Beach, FL
60, joined Aug. 2011
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Haiku & migraines don't mix well.
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7/22/2013 8:42:54 PM |
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copa157
Port Orange, FL
64, joined Jul. 2010
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migraines can cause pain
best to retreat into dark
haiku will be here
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7/23/2013 12:59:49 AM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
62, joined Apr. 2008
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It is a sure bet
That whatever I might guess
Will always be wrong.
Goodnight.
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7/23/2013 11:34:03 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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It's whom do you trust
johnny Carson show of past
He made us all laugh
Or was it closer to ...you bet your life hosted by Groucho Marx
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7/23/2013 11:39:56 AM |
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just_zoe1958
Burlington, VT
58, joined Dec. 2011
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Gentle rain again
Softly falling, cold, cleansing
Blessing after heat
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7/23/2013 4:19:50 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Quiet on ocean front
Coulda took to my day there
Tanning has to wait...
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7/23/2013 4:51:39 PM |
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pinetree10
Cumberland, MD
69, joined Nov. 2008
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Heat relief coming
Enjoy fresh fruit/veggies now
Each day a good day...
Haiku 'r us
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7/23/2013 5:45:29 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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A good day rewards
A good day refreshes mind
Tomorrow the moon...
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7/24/2013 9:53:33 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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A day passes by
A night goes even quicker
What happens Thursday
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7/24/2013 11:12:08 PM |
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annamranna
Bloomington, IL
62, joined Apr. 2008
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Thursday,
Trip to Wisconsin
Family and watermark
Going on duck trails.
I plan it so that we go two times a year for a long weekend.
I like that my children (including son-in-law) are so close.
They all work, so it is difficult to find times to vacation together,
however,
they can usually make it when it is just a long weekend.
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7/25/2013 3:07:50 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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I'm traveling man
More with cement boots on me
Trapped in New Jersey
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7/25/2013 6:37:41 PM |
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shezakeeper_2
San Antonio, TX
62, joined Jul. 2013
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Back roads I do ride
On my shiny horse of steel
Emotions freedom
hello Sorp
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7/25/2013 8:58:05 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Love is so splendid
It's a magnet attraction
Fuhgeddaboudit...
Smiles favorite close fuhgeddaboudit but spelled like I spell it....
Sheza welcome I hope..
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7/26/2013 6:02:21 AM |
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shezakeeper_2
San Antonio, TX
62, joined Jul. 2013
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Fuhgeddaboudit...
Hearts don’t forget how to love
Wise elders do say
mornin'
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7/26/2013 8:40:38 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Weekend has snuck in
Make the best of your free time
Enjoy your weekend
TGIF everyone...
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7/26/2013 1:46:14 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Heading to a wake
Teacher's son had passed in CA
personality
sad an ex teacher friend of mine who was my 7th grade teacher who taught me and my class Haiku, lost his son who died in CA just a short wh.ile ago...don't know how but he visted his family just like 3 weeks ago and died apparently suddenly returning to CA...He was a teacher too...RIP David
when i wrote a haiku in 7th grade the first few times my teacher, David's father, said "Zero" and throughout the years when he has seen me he always atarts with "zero"...lol...
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7/27/2013 9:39:19 PM |
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just_zoe1958
Burlington, VT
58, joined Dec. 2011
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Wonders of life missed
The unknown, unseen, untouched
Please show me, teach me.
Take my hand, guide me.
Is it real or make-believe?
Alas it's not so.
As you walk away
I'm alone, but not lonely
Small world, filled with love.
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7/28/2013 7:01:29 AM |
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joangel60
Hartford, WI
60, joined Nov. 2011
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Refreshing and cool
love is a sweet summer rain
that washes the world
everyone
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7/28/2013 10:28:31 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Sunday of Sundays
Day moves on gradually
July comes to end
Zoe and Jo where you been...
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7/28/2013 10:34:29 AM |
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joangel60
Hartford, WI
60, joined Nov. 2011
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July comes to an end
With cool breezes upon me
bring the sunshine back
Sorp... Just taking a break from DH and life...How you been?
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7/28/2013 12:20:35 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Where's the real sunshine
Hiding out like a good sneak
long days of summer
Ok Jo...always good to see ya..esp here..
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7/28/2013 12:22:21 PM |
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shezakeeper_2
San Antonio, TX
62, joined Jul. 2013
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Bring the sunshine back
Too soon for summer to end
Beaches yet to see
*Sorp, sorry about the loss of your friends son.
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7/28/2013 12:37:59 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Beaches yet to see
Life's moments yet to conquer
Friends to share them with
Thanks sheza...yes a tragic loss due to hemorrhage of the esophagus and was found dead on search for him for days..then they check his home in CA and found him then word came to N.J. sad...like I said his dad was my teacher and we stood friends since..he's like my dad too...
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7/28/2013 12:43:17 PM |
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shezakeeper_2
San Antonio, TX
62, joined Jul. 2013
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Friends to share life with
Are rare and far in between
Cherish your good friends
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7/28/2013 3:34:28 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Could use more posters
Haiku helps one to unwind
Their very own thoughts
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7/28/2013 8:30:54 PM |
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pinetree10
Cumberland, MD
69, joined Nov. 2008
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Posting here and there
Never sure just when I will
Like the breeze, here, gone...
Faces of old friends always welcome here.
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7/28/2013 9:09:42 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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It's summer time prime
Time to enjoy the outdoors
Labor day comes soon...
Thanks pine...
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7/29/2013 2:43:12 PM |
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hugandakiss_xo
Merritt, NC
62, joined Jul. 2011
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Labor day comes soon
So does the cold cold winter
Along with the snow
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7/29/2013 3:39:17 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Thinking of Robyn
Sunshine's daughter not too well
Keep her in your thoughts
Hello hugs, how are ya...
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7/29/2013 7:44:03 PM |
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pinetree10
Cumberland, MD
69, joined Nov. 2008
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Make my heart happy,
And make all my dreams come true.
Only you know how...
Hello HH
"welcome to my world
won't you come on in
Miracles, I guess
still happen now and then" The late great Eddie Arnold.
Another little know fact- Haikuers have fewer cavities...
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7/29/2013 7:46:53 PM |
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shezakeeper_2
San Antonio, TX
62, joined Jul. 2013
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Only you know how…
To rock me and light my flame
Easy like the rain
hi everyone
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7/30/2013 8:36:26 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Love is splendid thing
Baby please let the rain fall
Rain like throwing rice
Happy Tuesday folks
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7/30/2013 2:10:40 PM |
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just_zoe1958
Burlington, VT
58, joined Dec. 2011
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Tears fall to heal heart
A clearer outlook on life
From tears to a song.
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7/30/2013 8:15:51 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Word out is Robyn
She gets operated Wednesday
Wish her to get well
Sunshines daughter to be operated on this Wednesday...maybe if some know of her there is a thread for her..
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7/30/2013 9:58:44 PM |
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just_zoe1958
Burlington, VT
58, joined Dec. 2011
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I'm thinking of you
Hope your surgery went well
Waiting for your call.
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7/30/2013 10:36:26 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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While Life still goes on
Each day becomes history
Tomorrow more news
Zoe.
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8/1/2013 12:22:33 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Hate to bump my thread
Use to depend on posters
welcome, It's August
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8/1/2013 12:35:30 AM |
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dannoboy
Eldon, MO
64, joined Feb. 2009
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All should take the time
Much to say of stuff of life
Through it, not around.
Hey Sorp.
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8/1/2013 12:38:18 AM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Wonder about Robyn
Hoping surgery went well
Love to see her smile
Sunshines daughter was to have had surgery yesterday
Hello Danno good to see ya..
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8/1/2013 4:06:48 PM |
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sorpstar
Wayne, NJ
63, joined Oct. 2009
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Like no other thread
Special thread loves special friends
See, and check yourselves
Yes like good tuna, the "charlie the tuna" of great threads is haiku...well jmo...get your own gig...lol..
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