10/4/2015 7:49:43 PM |
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60christine
Tarentum, PA
56, joined May. 2012
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Would appreciate any suggestions on making my profile stand out. Thanks!
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10/4/2015 7:51:25 PM |
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maniacmassager
Lawrence, MA
51, joined Mar. 2008
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You are lovely.
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10/5/2015 12:33:18 AM |
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my2sunshine
Pulaski, NY
51, joined Apr. 2013
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I thought it was good...not so sure about the hand job innuendo though. You might want to leave that out to avoid ....
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10/5/2015 5:18:49 AM |
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mrchatnsplat
Litchfield Park, AZ
58, joined Feb. 2013
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Nice profile and the hand job reference should go under the interests area too
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10/5/2015 10:13:08 AM |
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ron10000z
Green Bay, WI
70, joined Jul. 2014
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Delete "take that any way you like fellas LOL!"
Balance your age range around your own age.
Both of those things give a tacky feel to the profile which is otherwise quite good.
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10/5/2015 7:51:22 PM |
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60christine
Tarentum, PA
56, joined May. 2012
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Thanks everyone, I will tweek it as you have all suggested!
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10/6/2015 9:42:02 AM |
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4uijack
New Port Richey, FL
82, joined Aug. 2013
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Would appreciate any suggestions on making my profile stand out. Thanks!
You need a set of nutz hangin' over your chin!!!!
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10/6/2015 9:54:16 PM |
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ratredux
Beaufort, SC
98, joined Dec. 2014
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Do you suck a mean c*ck?
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10/10/2015 7:02:39 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
62, joined Apr. 2011
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To the reader of this profile.
It sends two different messages and the impact with depend on the person reading.
On the one hand you speak of someone to hang out with.
On the other, where this relation will go.
actually that's how I take things too....lets don't rush, just let the cards fall where they may, and if they only go so far and no one was manipulative...then no harm done.
And I conveyed this my in profile to a point and was told by some women, it seems to imply sex without commitment.
I guess depending on the reader, your profile might suggest the same thing.
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10/10/2015 7:06:49 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
62, joined Apr. 2011
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I think its a well written profile and shows writing talent.
Beyond that...it doesn't stand out to me....because I see several other similar, but not as well written profiles....at first glance.
But it does stand out from the copy cat generic women's profile...that go on and on about themselves, who they are, what they want and that they expect to be treated like the most important thing in his life, all the while they prioritize many things, before he shows up on the totem pole.
In that sense...it does stand out.
However I take things written in a profile with a grain of salt and prefer to depend on my experiences and read between the lines.
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10/11/2015 4:29:34 PM |
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inde_5
Bonaire, GA
43, joined Sep. 2014
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..use a nude photo as your screen shot..
That should make you stand out plenty.
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10/12/2015 10:11:32 AM |
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terbear1234
Bremerton, WA
41, joined Apr. 2010
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I think a really great headshot as your main pic would help. You only get one chance to make a good impression, right? It should be close up (just your head) and we should be able to see all of your head - hair, eyes, teeth. A great big smile is imperative - it says you're friendly and happy.
Fill in the Interest box. Not only does it make you seem more interesting and tells them more about you, but it also makes you more match-/search-able.
I'd fill in the box about what religion you are. What are you hiding? Devil worship? That one not being filled in is a red flag to me.
Overall, it's far better written than most. Great job!
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11/29/2015 10:52:56 AM |
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bumblebee7
Fort Payne, AL
62, joined Apr. 2011
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A couple of points.
The main picture almost looks like a commercial for those devices for retired people, when they fall down and can't get up.
And women that post pics of their kids or grand kids....sends a message to men that they will never only be so important to you, despite ost women want to be treated like number one to him.
Therefor....its too one sided for most men.
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2/5/2016 12:13:26 AM |
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liteguy
Scranton, PA
60, joined Dec. 2007
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cant see it ???
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2/5/2016 6:53:19 AM |
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cupocheer
Assumption, IL
68, joined May. 2010
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Basically, Christine.... Who gives a crap if you suck?
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2/5/2016 2:18:38 PM |
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preciousfox15
Bolingbrook, IL
55, joined Dec. 2007
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Invisible
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2/5/2016 9:05:10 PM |
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cupocheer
Assumption, IL
68, joined May. 2010
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2/5/2016 9:16:10 PM |
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bandit__geezer
FujianFujian
China
58, joined Oct. 2015
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It's actually pretty good, although your photo isn't showing up in the forums.
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2/5/2016 9:22:13 PM |
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cupocheer
Assumption, IL
68, joined May. 2010
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Their picture isn't showing up because their profile is invisible.
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2/5/2016 10:20:08 PM |
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bandit__geezer
FujianFujian
China
58, joined Oct. 2015
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Their picture isn't showing up because their profile is invisible.
No it's not. I can open her profile when I click on her screen name.
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2/5/2016 10:50:58 PM |
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cupocheer
Assumption, IL
68, joined May. 2010
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That is because she is a friend of yours or it is one of your other profiles. Whatever.
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2/6/2016 7:27:29 AM |
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bandit__geezer
FujianFujian
China
58, joined Oct. 2015
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That is because she is a friend of yours or it is one of your other profiles. Whatever.
Wrong and wrong again! I have no friends. Friend request doesn't work. I have only this profile.
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2/6/2016 10:21:03 PM |
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cupocheer
Assumption, IL
68, joined May. 2010
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You have only this profile in this profile name?
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2/15/2016 1:21:01 PM |
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god_says
Cabo San Lucas
Mexico
49, joined Aug. 2014
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Christine, show me your tits!
I wanna see if you're worth my time.
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2/15/2016 5:57:00 PM |
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fairymaiden
Bristol, CT
50, joined Mar. 2014
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Christine, show me your tits!
I wanna see if you're worth my time.
No wonder she blocked everyone. To keep out riff raff like this. ^^^^^^
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2/16/2016 5:21:21 PM |
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god_says
Cabo San Lucas
Mexico
49, joined Aug. 2014
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No wonder she blocked everyone. To keep out riff raff like this. ^^^^^^
Apparently, Christine doesn't think I'm riff raff.
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2/25/2016 8:40:28 AM |
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tweetibirdd
Madison, TN
74, joined Aug. 2014
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Apparently, Christine doesn't think I'm riff raff.
Me either...
God, how you like my little tweeties?
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3/2/2016 8:29:24 PM |
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nicefitguy
King of Prussia, PA
47, joined Nov. 2007
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I thought it was good...not so sure about the hand job innuendo though. You might want to leave that out to avoid ....
She gives them on the 1st date.
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3/6/2016 3:32:40 AM |
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inde_5
Bonaire, GA
43, joined Sep. 2014
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Basically, Christine.... Who gives a crap if you suck?
I do....
I don't really have much fun with a girl who never sucks...js sayin.
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